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    here's a lil song i wrote it's called "don't wanna go on." tell me what ya think.

    it's time for me to get a nine
    to blow out my f**kin mind
    2 late its already messed from all this weed
    why go to detox, there's no need
    after all there's worse things than drugs
    like shootin up all my classmates with slugs
    n savin some rounds for the teacher
    feel sorry later n confess to the preacher
    left skitzophenic from the childhood i had
    ( come on, it couln't of been that bad )
    my dad was constantly mad
    n my mom was always sad
    always thinkin it was my fault late at night in bed
    these things left floatin around in my head
    used to be in my own world
    blockin out every boy n girl
    sit alone in my room filled with black
    listenin to eminem n dynamite hack
    this was a sign of a cry for help
    but no1 knew how i really felt
    n this is me not bein false or fake
    this is why i always have my mind baked

    **Chorus**
    don't wanna go on livin like this
    fo no reason always gettin pissed
    or gettin teased n gettin dissed
    if i go, don't think i'll be missed
    n i don't wanna go on livin like this

    why do p-ple always have to strike
    at p-ple that step up n take the mic
    my rhymes might not say what's right
    n their not always tight
    so what if their not the best
    at least in a crowd i stand out from the rest
    i'm any thin but the typical person
    i'm always spittin raps n cursin
    n all the p-ple out there boo-in my shit
    just makes me enjoy spittin it
    spittin it in their face
    n givin them a taste
    of my messed up lifestyle
    n how it's always wild
    no one really likes my rhymes
    so i spit even more, all the time
    i know rhymin won't get me n e fame
    cuz my shit always comes out lame
    writin rhymes some how always got me out
    n stopped me from worryin what my life's bout
    when i stop writin i just wanna shout
    cuz the problems are still there
    n jus even hareder for me to bare

    **Chorus**
    don't wanna go on livin like this
    fo no reason always gettin pissed
    or gettin teased n gettin dissed
    if i go , don't think i'll be missed
    n i don't wanna go on livin like this

    there's no reason for me to go on
    n nobody will miss me when i'm gone
    this suicide attempt neva works
    n i still wanna leave this world filled with jerks
    do you think i really need to see a shrink
    cuz i pour lysol in a cup n started to drink
    i don't have a real friend
    n i still want my life to end
    i feel bad fo p-ple whose lives r worse
    this shit just makes me wanna curse
    i don't think life will get n e betta
    so i'm sayin good bye in this letta

    **Chorus**
    don't wanna go on livin like this
    fo no reason always gettin pissed
    or gettin teased n gettin dissed
    if i go, don't think i'll be missed
    n i don't wanna go on livin like this

    (repeat chorus)
    ~Shady Grl~
    The Cartel First Lady
    Cartel 4 lyfe n even longa!

    SHOUT OUTZ: Underworld, LL, Nafareus, West Side aka LDM, Pezza, DH88, the rest of tha Cartel, Bigg T, XeroXL, Big Proof n the rest of D12, n all the dirty headz in Fall River!!!

  • #2
    Dope

    That shit is dope, girl. Keep on writin'! Blingaz is comin' strong!
    Lyrikally Lost aka Fidel Kastrator


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    • #3
      ........

      That was tight Shady Grl.Keep'em up,there hot..

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      • #4
        i really like that hook,but the lyrics are aight,you coulda put more thought into some of the lines

        i know rhymin won't get me n e fame
        cuz my shit always comes out lame
        writin rhymes some how always got me out
        n stopped me from worryin what my life's bout
        when i stop writin i just wanna shout
        cuz the problems are still there
        n jus even hareder for me to bare

        an could have usd more syllables
        i paint a portrait faceless

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        • #5
          yo shadygrl thats some nice shit- keep it up
          peace
          ~Mike~
          here baby hit the bong while the west coast rolls along ~ dre



          peace yall
          ~mike~

          Brain Damage ~ ever since the day i was born , drugs is what they used to say i was on !!!!!

          thre is a place called heaven and a place called hell , a place called prison and a place call jain and IM headed to all of em cept 1!!

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          • #6
            thanx guys, i appriciate the props. n thanx fo the advice fuzz_brady. or was it critisism? i'll take it as advice.
            ~Shady Grl~
            The Cartel First Lady
            Cartel 4 lyfe n even longa!

            SHOUT OUTZ: Underworld, LL, Nafareus, West Side aka LDM, Pezza, DH88, the rest of tha Cartel, Bigg T, XeroXL, Big Proof n the rest of D12, n all the dirty headz in Fall River!!!

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