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  • it sucks but pleaze rate anywayz

    u think u iller than this/ and now u tryin to diss/
    but what u say just aint shit/ and now u gettin me pissed/
    and then u fucked with my rhyme/ and that done fucked up my mind/so ima take all this shit/ and shove it back in ur face/ and put u back into place/ now im fuckin ur bitch/and i start ripin mad shit/ that just cant be beat by your diss/ and now u cryin to me/ that u aint my enimie/ but i just take a big piss/ and think about ur mad diss/ and say u just a big ho/ and u cant fuck wit my flow/ so u bets leave and go grow/ and now that u know/ u shouldnt diss this bad flow/ or ill kill u and ur ho/


    yeah i know it sucked but it was like my 2nd one so dont be too harsh on me
    Peace~mike~
    here baby hit the bong while the west coast rolls along ~ dre



    peace yall
    ~mike~

    Brain Damage ~ ever since the day i was born , drugs is what they used to say i was on !!!!!

    thre is a place called heaven and a place called hell , a place called prison and a place call jain and IM headed to all of em cept 1!!

  • #2
    aiyo

    the way u used one sound alot in more than 2 bars made da flow great just try to u a bigger vocab and not use da same word so much...not bad
    My shit my way, so fuck off!

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    • #3
      yo, its dope man and for ur second try
      aight peace 1 love

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      • #4
        It was too simple in all aspects, theyre weren't no multi-sylabell rhyming, basic vocab, flow was aight, but the content was kinda wack and the theme...in future, pick a theme to freestyle about before u start writin and just build around that idea using better vocab...etc etc

        Keep rhymin, Keep postin

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