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  • My First Freestyle

    Hey all this is my first freestyle. Let me know what you think about it. I just did it about 10 minutes ago, and I am lookin for some input. Peace


    Im new to this shit so Im bringin it all
    Im throwin everything from wall to wall
    brooms and bats will make ya crawl
    my knife to your throat will end it all.
    my lifes a mess and im not given a fuck
    any of you faggots... hank, huck or chuck.
    good luck slut, fucked up luck, with my fucked up cuts
    Im fucked up much as uncle buck blowin chunks
    from his fucked up lunch.

    Im not all there in the head
    I dont want it orally, fuck that
    I want it anally instead!
    Theres things you just wont understand
    about a white man with a year round tan
    im hittin ya with the back of my hand
    welded together with a fryin pan
    dont panic sam, dan the mans gonna will be back
    with your ham sandwich made with spam
    Im telling you all to watch the fuck out
    Im sicker than you chowin your sour crouts
    so go pout all your doubts to the power pow pow
    while im shoutin like this loud mouth
    but for now theres one thing to shout
    I gotta tell you all ..... that I am out.

  • #2
    Re: My First Freestyle

    Originally posted by showstopper
    I dont want it orally, fuck that
    I want it anally instead!
    I agree, i dont think you're right in the head, fag.
    if i had a dick i know u'd be riding it

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    • #3
      you bitch


      yea you are a fag in da makin!
      if you carry on like that you will end up like ICP!

      or worese marcel lee!!
      his a bitch and a fag! go show him your rhyme he might like it!

      you wanna turn out like me so you can put these fags like yourself back in there place!!!

      lil bitch made ass faggots...........

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      • #4
        hahahaha u want it "anally"

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        • #5
          hey

          LOL its not like that shits all true..... its just words. i was actually not looking to see if you thought i was a fag or not, but just some thoughts on my rymes, damn. yea and icp are a bunch of fuckin homos, but i dont sound like that. catch ya later

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          • #6
            i'm just bichin with ya

            thats cool man, its just kinda an odd thing to do, you know, make yourself sound like a fag in your rhyme.

            i thought it was alright, keep 'em coming
            if i had a dick i know u'd be riding it

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            • #7
              interesting...
              I don’t need leather pants and tattoos to try to act cool,
              I got throwbacks and steel chains, I lead the new school.

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              • #8
                iight.....
                -=((Battle Record))=-
                ...26-Wins...
                ...5-Loses...
                ...19-KO's...
                Unleashed Skillz Tourny Winner

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                • #9
                  shutup bitches he asked for imput not none or your bullshit

                  Elevate you vocab more::
                  make your lines longer so they flow easier::
                  Pick One topic n stick t it cauz thern u all over n its pain wack::

                  o1ne
                  Walk the path of Jesus, witness if Hell frizzes
                  The mind teases reality, crack the pieces
                  Nothin' eases, bein' chastise with blood baptize
                  Guys revise, acknowledge past lives
                  MF Grimm

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                  • #10
                    Aint this a forum on MC skillz boyeez??? Yeah I thought so, anyway, whatever is whatever for your anal desires, but the flow and multies were aight for your first freestyle...If this was really your first then you do have skill and keep up the off the wall shit....Remember They have to fear ya, before they feel ya....Its the ones flyin over the cookoos nest that have it right...Contrary to what any of these sorry MC's have to say, and if any of ya want to battle this out for a title set it, Aight cause I will lyrically rape a whack MC>>>>>
                    "You walk around Mad, Ya let ya anger Blind You
                    We walk around, just PLAYIN THE VIOLIN BEHIND YOU!!" - Encore

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                    • #11
                      cool man you've got some awesome rhymes... i got a suggestion though, just add in another rhyme about how you were just joking. That'll redeem you. That is, if you aren't gay. That is, if you're a guy
                      Last edited by RazorX; 11-25-2004, 08:31 PM.
                      Check out my rhymes
                      Fight or Fall- www.d12world.com/board/showthread.php?t=149235
                      others:
                      www.d12world.com/board/showthread.php?t=149670
                      www.d12world.com/board/showthread.php?t=149774

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                      • #12
                        Well im not gay, and im not a guy, so i guess im a heterosexual female MC/ hope that sets the record straight pardon the pun....
                        "You walk around Mad, Ya let ya anger Blind You
                        We walk around, just PLAYIN THE VIOLIN BEHIND YOU!!" - Encore

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