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    Here's a little something I just typed out right now. I've written some better shit but I don't feel like typing it all out. This is the first time I posted something up here, so can y'all check this out and rate it and tell me how I could change it to make it better

    I'm flirtatious I can't help it
    It's contagious, boys have felt it
    When you look this good its practical
    To flaunt it, it's just natural
    Boys surround me and can't get enough
    Girls around me wanna call my bluff
    But I'm the one nobody can touch
    I'm infinite, so unstoppable it's crazy
    I look innocent, but there's reasons why people hate me
    I piss off people at every chance I get
    I'm like that so I dissed the teacher's pet
    Called her a midget and made her wept
    Slapped the counselor when she called me Brigette
    Learn to pronounce it you stupid bitch
    You used up your allowance here's a another hit
    Its not your bad speech that got me pissed
    Its that I don't like you're fucking rudeness
    I'm tired of all these people hating
    Talking 'bout me, wondering who I'm dating
    At school its like I'm a celebrity
    The rumors fly and they're all believed
    But I say "fuck it" I'm not one to cry
    I just find the person who started it and forget asking why
    I don't need a reason we're officially beefin'
    You talked about me so you deserve a beating
    I'll break your poser ass with your worn out adidas
    It's all a day in the life of this diva

  • #2
    Doesn't anybody want to rate it?

    uppin' for people to see. C'mon somebody rate it!!

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    • #3
      ok, not bad. it stuck to the subject and got its point across,
      the rhymes were a lil basic but so what, the bars were all similar length so it flowed well. just keep posting, put one of youre longer rhymes up. itll show people how well you can maintain a flow over a longer peroid.

      I sense a lot of tension in your rhymes, if youre really that fine i could give you a massage!!?? lol

      keep at it girl.

      PEACE
      The only thing worse than the wretched pain in my mouth is the excrement spewing from yours-Stewie Griffen

      ONLY GOD CAN JUDGE ME

      R.I.P ~ Tupac Shakur-my biggest musical inspiration…you are missed everyday

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      • #4
        Yo Diva, dat be some dope shit, good 2 see some of the ladies out there gettin into the rap scene. Well.... good shit.
        Hit me back with a pm sometime
        Peace
        **Tha New Era**

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        • #5
          fuck, u was betta then me when i first started lol,
          tight verse girl, and keep it real, ill belooking for more stuff from u

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          • #6
            Thanx for the input!

            Thanks for replying guys. I do have some longer rhymes and songs that I'll put up. I also wanna try some battling to test and improve my skills more.

            Originally posted by Illrun

            I sense a lot of tension in your rhymes, if youre really that fine i could give you a massage!!?? lol
            lol yeah there's a lot of tension in it! Trust me I got some that I wrote about peeps I hate at my school that really shows off the tension! You know when you're this fine girls hate on you a lot! lol I do sorta look like my avatar pic cuz I edited it so the hair would be long enough to look like mine. Well thanks again guys I'll post more!

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            • #7
              LoL Oh shit!!

              yo, babe, that was good. u was keepin' it real. that was dope, girl. ur like tha valley girl of rap lol. keep on writin'.
              Lyrikally Lost aka Fidel Kastrator


              http://invince.8m.net/dei2.gif

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              • #8
                Kinda ripped from Em with the adidas shit but not bad. Oh and post a pic so we can see why are the girlies are jealous of you.
                Peace 5 and 92, you're missed.

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                • #9
                  lol thanks guys. Trust me I'm no valley girl. I would totally post a pic up here but my scanner ain't working and I don't know why. The light won't come on when I try to use it. So if any of y'all know how to fix a scanner tell me and I'll post up a pic!

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                  • #10
                    ....

                    Yeah, that was pretty good, with standards raising you make us have to "keep it up"; in more ways than one.lol.-Peace out
                    *****-D-V-S-*****

                    *****-Dangerous-Vicious-Sick-*****

                    100% Real

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                    • #11
                      lol thanx DVS. I posted some new shit under "A New Rhyme from the Diva" so check it out y'all!

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