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  • emotional/happy love rhyme, please peep and give feedback..please..

    this rhyme is dedicated to every man out there that has gotten thier heart broken.


    yo my love for a girl is so unbelievable//
    every dream she wishs i smile and say''is achievable''//
    this girl may not love me the way i love her//
    but every time i am near her, everything besides her is a blur//
    When she looks at me, all i see is happiness//
    Everytime i am not with her, her face comes back quickly with reminicse//
    there is a girl for everyman who makes them feel this emotional//
    nothing in this world, can make your love for each other repel//
    many things bring her sorrow and her sadness//
    but she will know that when you say ''i love you'', she will know its bliss//
    love comes and travels everyday, some not good some good//
    but everytime she asks why you love her, you say''because i should''//
    Now love comes differently for every different person//
    some end up in happiness, but others stay in the dark, and keep lurking//
    now i know all you guys out there, have been in love at least once//
    that you have just took a glimpse at her, then began to go nuts//
    We all have gotten our heart broken, possibly crushed//
    she might have even gaven you a head rush//
    but you will always remember one thing about her,that she was the one......that always made you blush//

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    fer real...thats my type of shit...emotional..shit nigz can feel, nah mean? keep it real....that wuz deep, du...
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    • #3
      yo thanx man,

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      • #4
        I feel ya

        Yo dawg dat rhymes was tight!! i felt what yo were sayin in dat verse!! i was feelin it all tha way!! yo keep up tha good rhymes!!

        Yo dawg r u in a cru?? do u wanna be in a cru??

        Hit me back on this one!!

        PEACE
        .: Ruban Bates :.
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        (BattlE RecorD - 25/12)
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        • #5
          that was dope, dawg. eh-yo, go peep mah shit and tell me whatcu think, aiight? peace!
          Lyrikally Lost aka Fidel Kastrator


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          • #6
            o my god.My heart is all a flutter.I don't know why though.It was sweat and very warm hearted.I hope I've made a few blush like that in my life..I wonder.It was like you dropped your heart on my key board.I'm gonna read it again.Take it easy!

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            • #7

              thanx

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              • #8
                uppin

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                • #9
                  I was feelin' that, it reminded me to someone (a guy of course! lol) That was good though. Since you're a little bit more experience with this than I am can ya go peep my first thing I posted on here? It's the thread called "Hey y'all rate this" and I'm the only person who's responded so I'd appreciate it if you rated it. Sorry for that shameless plug for my rhyme, but yo yours was really good!

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                  • #10
                    yo man I was feelin that fo sure! first girl I ever loved led me on for almost a year then dropped me said she never loved me an loved my best friend. I wuz deffinetly in that one Acid. nice shit.
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                    • #11
                      ohh shit man....

                      hey...you know what...my best friend girl loves me more than him....i wonder why that happens? she told me to keep it secret but nah.....i rather mind my ownself...and i told her that if she wanna end the relationship...she better lie...or else i'm in deep shit...
                      You wanna be a rap superstar in the biz
                      and take shit from people who dont know what it is
                      I wish it was all fun and games but the price of fame is high
                      and some cant pay the way
                      still trapped in what you rapping about
                      tell me what happened when you lost
                      the route you took started collapsing
                      no fans no fame no respect no change no women
                      and everybody shittin on your name

                      Cypress

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                      • #12
                        bump

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                        • #13
                          uppin, come on i want some more coment's

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                          • #14
                            i peeped it

                            yo that shit was deep. i think that is the most emotional thing i have seen on here next to contros freestyle bout him and his mom. that was some good shit. keep it up. i wanna read some more
                            ThAtS Y Me AnD XeRo ArE GuNnA FuCk Up ThE tAg ToUrNi (directed to all of the other tag members out there)

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                            • #15
                              aight thanx dawg

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