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    alot of people been askin why we talk about takin over 'n shit, well i'm finta tell ya, and sum other shit too.........


    cuz we be shoot fo tha stars and land on tha moon,
    cartel skills comin down on u like rain in a monsoon,
    enough fresh rhymes 2 fill 10 lyrical lagoons,
    it sells like wild fire spreads, that why we make rap tunes,
    we thinkin big! big like J-Lo's ass,
    big like how in 10 years we can count our cash,
    so we rip and tear, and leave u wit a 10 inch gash,
    some rappers be more repetitive tha Big Mouth Billy Bass,
    sayin tha same old shit over and over again,
    talkin bout how my face gonna be on a milk cartin,
    but dont dare fuck around wit tha killa cartel ten,
    or we'll leave ur body stuffed inside our a trash bin,
    skills? we got'em, and more than most,
    our flows stay wit u, haunt u like a lyrical ghost,
    so if u just gonna talk shit, dont even reply to this post,
    wack emcees gettin cooked more than a roast,
    see right now, i dont give a fuck wut u think,
    say i suck, fuck, i wont skip a wink,
    i'll skin u alive and wear u like u wuz mink,
    tha cartel cooks hataz more than we cook hot links


    so u think that sucked? haha, like i give an elephant shit wut u think!
    Elite Tournament 2 Champion
    like 110-19 or some shit
    blah blah blah and all that other shit we used to put in our sigs lol
    [insert net crew banner here]

  • #2
    tight shit dawg

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    • #3
      thanx dawg, that only took me about 3 min, lol
      Elite Tournament 2 Champion
      like 110-19 or some shit
      blah blah blah and all that other shit we used to put in our sigs lol
      [insert net crew banner here]

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      • #4
        i liked that shit, but ya know that already.
        ~Shady Grl~
        The Cartel First Lady
        Cartel 4 lyfe n even longa!

        SHOUT OUTZ: Underworld, LL, Nafareus, West Side aka LDM, Pezza, DH88, the rest of tha Cartel, Bigg T, XeroXL, Big Proof n the rest of D12, n all the dirty headz in Fall River!!!

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        • #5
          yea
          Elite Tournament 2 Champion
          like 110-19 or some shit
          blah blah blah and all that other shit we used to put in our sigs lol
          [insert net crew banner here]

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          • #6
            Feedbak

            Damn, if he's gunna post a rhyme then you mite aswell actually read it thru and give him some real feedback..."I thought it was dope" aint gunna help so...

            I thought it was pretty good, nice flow, good choices of vocab, but you could try a few multi's in there and it would sound dope...the bars wasnt too long or short so it would sound nice if you spit it...good work

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            • #7
              thanx dawg, imma try 2 start usin bigger rhyme sets than 4 too, peace
              Elite Tournament 2 Champion
              like 110-19 or some shit
              blah blah blah and all that other shit we used to put in our sigs lol
              [insert net crew banner here]

              Comment


              • #8
                Aye

                Is the cartel like a crew on this forum? I didn't know they did that shit here, I'm new to this forum. That's fuckin tight, oh well later.
                Status:

                [ Lyrically Ripped Apart ]
                ~ Profanity
                ~ X-TACY
                ~ The Slick Jesus
                ~ DJ Scidazals

                [ Tha Hot Emcees ]
                ~ Prominant
                ~ The Invincible
                ~ Dark-Druid
                ~ PurpleHaze2701
                ~ Eyerone


                My Crew:

                [ Kurrupted Mindz ]
                ~ PoiZonous ExiZtance
                ~ Dark-Druid
                ~ Jehu

                [ Other Doggz ]
                ~ Cad
                ~ The Slick Jesus
                ~ Prominant
                ~ Lyrikally Lost
                ~ The Invincible
                ~ ShAdY D12 DiVa


                Signature:

                [ PoiZonous E. ]
                ~ I am the PoiZonous ExiZtance
                ~ Tha Toxic Death
                ~ I come here to slit wrists
                ~ To strip you of your every last breath

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                • #9
                  yea we a crew that came over here about a week or so ago frum dirty12.com
                  Elite Tournament 2 Champion
                  like 110-19 or some shit
                  blah blah blah and all that other shit we used to put in our sigs lol
                  [insert net crew banner here]

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                  • #10
                    Sup

                    Cool, cool, aye whenever ya have the time check out my rhymes!
                    Status:

                    [ Lyrically Ripped Apart ]
                    ~ Profanity
                    ~ X-TACY
                    ~ The Slick Jesus
                    ~ DJ Scidazals

                    [ Tha Hot Emcees ]
                    ~ Prominant
                    ~ The Invincible
                    ~ Dark-Druid
                    ~ PurpleHaze2701
                    ~ Eyerone


                    My Crew:

                    [ Kurrupted Mindz ]
                    ~ PoiZonous ExiZtance
                    ~ Dark-Druid
                    ~ Jehu

                    [ Other Doggz ]
                    ~ Cad
                    ~ The Slick Jesus
                    ~ Prominant
                    ~ Lyrikally Lost
                    ~ The Invincible
                    ~ ShAdY D12 DiVa


                    Signature:

                    [ PoiZonous E. ]
                    ~ I am the PoiZonous ExiZtance
                    ~ Tha Toxic Death
                    ~ I come here to slit wrists
                    ~ To strip you of your every last breath

                    Comment


                    • #11
                      ight
                      Elite Tournament 2 Champion
                      like 110-19 or some shit
                      blah blah blah and all that other shit we used to put in our sigs lol
                      [insert net crew banner here]

                      Comment


                      • #12
                        yo poizonus e post us some of ur rhymes n we'll look at it we're looking to expand so we'll def take a look. peace. cartel we gotz to go bak to d12.com cus dem black ice fools talk too much shit n they start recruiting mad pplz so we gots to go bak n take em out fo good. lataz
                        ***DH rocks all ya***

                        THA CARTEL:

                        dirtyharry88 a.K.a Da Kingpin
                        Underworld a.K.a M. KILLA
                        Lyrikally Lost a.K.a BLOOPERZ
                        The Don a.K.a DON JUAN
                        Shady Grl a.K.a CARTEL FIRST LADY
                        Cocaine a.K.a DA INHIBITOR
                        Cad a.K.a THA DESPERADO
                        Dopemaster a.K.a Lyrical Dopemaster
                        Nafareus a.K.a TED BUNDY
                        Expencesive a.K.a INVISIBLE MAN
                        Acidlow a.K.a LYRICAL SMOKER
                        xl a.K.a MR BIG
                        Synical a.K.a UP-FRONT


                        ~~THE 13 DEMONS~~

                        "LYRICALLY DEFUSED"

                        -J GRAVY(3-0)

                        "Those that live in glass houses should not throw rocks"- Churchill

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                        • #13
                          Heres a rhyme I wrote after seeing Fast and Furious about a couple months ago:

                          My rhymes
                          Speedin more than the vehicles in fast and the furious
                          Completely fearless
                          Taken the chance of doin' time
                          When they gear shift
                          Get ready for some heavy shit
                          When they tires lift
                          An' the look on the loosers face
                          Totally Priceless
                          I drop bars
                          Like steel cars
                          Readin' up to like 120MPH on the gauge
                          Street Racing
                          Perfect way to release your rage
                          Cars pacing
                          Nuthin can make em stop
                          Cept for cops
                          Get locked in a cage

                          Here's one I just did that I'ma use in my next battle so fuckers watch out:

                          Aight (name) you don't stand a chance
                          Give up now and leave these battles to the professional
                          At disfiguring people like a lyrical cannibal
                          Dishin out new rhymes by the handful
                          Got this whole fuckin board under mind control
                          After this battle is over
                          The results will be me makin you go into therapy from all these insults
                          Scared cause you don't wanna face defeat
                          Scared cause you can't handle the heat
                          Of my lyrical cannibalism
                          Rhymes highly flammable
                          And I don't take well to critism
                          But still you got the stupidity to battle me
                          Usin words of complete profanity
                          Talkin like you can handle me
                          A mind controlled by insanity
                          But I must give you props you've done the impossible
                          This is huge, colossal
                          Your rhymes are like a mix of
                          Hanson, and Marilyn Manson
                          You sayin shit anywhere from "Fuck you" to "c'mon somebody pants him!"
                          Your mind I'll always haunt
                          Till the end of time
                          When your mom get's out of the bathroom and stop's using blaussant
                          The all herbal breast enhancer
                          She's hoping its a cure for cancer
                          I'ma cause a massacre
                          Kill your whole fuckin' family
                          It's ok this is how I act normally
                          Spittin this shit, rippin it vocally

                          And here's one I did when I was in a dark mood, it ended up being a verse for a rap of mine:

                          All the world ever feels towards me is hatred
                          Don't touch me I'm sacred
                          X Rated
                          Never Noticed
                          I'm Faded
                          While Aerosmith keeps droppin gay ass shit like "Jaded"
                          Sometimes I feel like this whole fuckin world is against me
                          No one ever takes me seriously
                          I used to hit things head on fearlessly
                          But I became rejected by society
                          I used to beg god to let someone notice me
                          (Please!)
                          It's like I've been infected with some kind of disease
                          It was kind of hard to except myself
                          When no one else would
                          It was like no one knew how I felt
                          So misunderstood
                          I got tired of being an outcast
                          The pain I felt was vast
                          How insane I went
                          I was aghast
                          But I eventually accepted myself
                          No matter how demented and disturbed
                          I knew it was the only way the pain could be cured
                          Look what you've done world
                          Now I'm completely corrupted
                          This is my story told
                          But I've adjusted
                          Here's a final statement
                          Fuck it
                          Status:

                          [ Lyrically Ripped Apart ]
                          ~ Profanity
                          ~ X-TACY
                          ~ The Slick Jesus
                          ~ DJ Scidazals

                          [ Tha Hot Emcees ]
                          ~ Prominant
                          ~ The Invincible
                          ~ Dark-Druid
                          ~ PurpleHaze2701
                          ~ Eyerone


                          My Crew:

                          [ Kurrupted Mindz ]
                          ~ PoiZonous ExiZtance
                          ~ Dark-Druid
                          ~ Jehu

                          [ Other Doggz ]
                          ~ Cad
                          ~ The Slick Jesus
                          ~ Prominant
                          ~ Lyrikally Lost
                          ~ The Invincible
                          ~ ShAdY D12 DiVa


                          Signature:

                          [ PoiZonous E. ]
                          ~ I am the PoiZonous ExiZtance
                          ~ Tha Toxic Death
                          ~ I come here to slit wrists
                          ~ To strip you of your every last breath

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                          • #14
                            poisonus your rhymes are pretty tite, if you wanna be in tha cartel jsu put us in your signature. peace
                            ***DH rocks all ya***

                            THA CARTEL:

                            dirtyharry88 a.K.a Da Kingpin
                            Underworld a.K.a M. KILLA
                            Lyrikally Lost a.K.a BLOOPERZ
                            The Don a.K.a DON JUAN
                            Shady Grl a.K.a CARTEL FIRST LADY
                            Cocaine a.K.a DA INHIBITOR
                            Cad a.K.a THA DESPERADO
                            Dopemaster a.K.a Lyrical Dopemaster
                            Nafareus a.K.a TED BUNDY
                            Expencesive a.K.a INVISIBLE MAN
                            Acidlow a.K.a LYRICAL SMOKER
                            xl a.K.a MR BIG
                            Synical a.K.a UP-FRONT


                            ~~THE 13 DEMONS~~

                            "LYRICALLY DEFUSED"

                            -J GRAVY(3-0)

                            "Those that live in glass houses should not throw rocks"- Churchill

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                            • #15
                              Aye

                              Aight I'll get back to you on that, I'm still new to tha sie and I dunno if I should be joining a crew yet. So I'll PM you with my decision, but ayo if I got I'm not goin without my dawg Dark-Druid if I do decide to go, but dont worry he's atleast twice as good as I am.
                              Status:

                              [ Lyrically Ripped Apart ]
                              ~ Profanity
                              ~ X-TACY
                              ~ The Slick Jesus
                              ~ DJ Scidazals

                              [ Tha Hot Emcees ]
                              ~ Prominant
                              ~ The Invincible
                              ~ Dark-Druid
                              ~ PurpleHaze2701
                              ~ Eyerone


                              My Crew:

                              [ Kurrupted Mindz ]
                              ~ PoiZonous ExiZtance
                              ~ Dark-Druid
                              ~ Jehu

                              [ Other Doggz ]
                              ~ Cad
                              ~ The Slick Jesus
                              ~ Prominant
                              ~ Lyrikally Lost
                              ~ The Invincible
                              ~ ShAdY D12 DiVa


                              Signature:

                              [ PoiZonous E. ]
                              ~ I am the PoiZonous ExiZtance
                              ~ Tha Toxic Death
                              ~ I come here to slit wrists
                              ~ To strip you of your every last breath

                              Comment

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