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    11 courier red Right ive just joined so i was wondering if y'all could rate my shit...Thanx

    Well im the D to the V with the S on the end;
    Im 100% gangsta i dont need to pretend;
    My styles so wanted y'all wanna lend;
    I'll brake you so much its impossible to mend;
    Your styles so fake and bought its out of stock;
    How can you be any good with a bigger clock than a cock;
    Cus im the real public enemy, feared from coast to coast;
    But i don't like to boast but well i am the most;
    Hotter than toast, even if you do add curry;
    So y'all rate this and hurry.....


    Out of Ten?--DVS
    *****-D-V-S-*****

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    100% Real

  • #2
    frum 1-10, a 5
    Elite Tournament 2 Champion
    like 110-19 or some shit
    blah blah blah and all that other shit we used to put in our sigs lol
    [insert net crew banner here]

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    • #3
      Aight

      Well im thinking up sum very good ideas at the mo
      *****-D-V-S-*****

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      • #4
        i give you a 5 , you had tha right scheme and all, but your vocab was really weak, just up your vocab, surprisingly, bigger words are easier to rhyme.


        I'm like a conflagration( a wild fire), that'll stagga a nation, and leave complications//
        Most wit cripulations and have no stipulations, cuz of manipulations//
        I slap you like a bitch wit a period at tha end of a sentence, leavin you no defendants, no descendants, and neglectin you worse than flight attendants//
        You got more whack scrub rhymes than a Brilo Factory//
        Freestyle or battle, ya shit can't b unsatisfactory//


        See what i mean, i didn't even really think about that. They are just easier to rhyme, if you want, hit me Sephiroth6002 = AIM
        “See to live is to suffer but to survive
        well that's to find meaning in the suffering.” ~ D.M.X.

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        • #5
          i give it a 6. i just joined 2. can you rate my song "Don't wanna go on." it's just a lil suttin i wrote a while ago.
          ~Shady Grl~
          The Cartel First Lady
          Cartel 4 lyfe n even longa!

          SHOUT OUTZ: Underworld, LL, Nafareus, West Side aka LDM, Pezza, DH88, the rest of tha Cartel, Bigg T, XeroXL, Big Proof n the rest of D12, n all the dirty headz in Fall River!!!

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          • #6
            gotta give it a 6 as well. it started off real hot with nice flow but after that it quickly got weaker, and that's not too good for a verse THAT short.

            peace
            Slaughterhouse II bring the beef when it's raw

            http://fugu.hgmp.mrc.ac.uk/Images/fugu2.gif

            "Tha only time you got ya crowd goin back and forth
            is at ya gay peepshow when they jackin off."

            "I could give a fuck about ya race
            but if ya wanna be black I could shit on your face."

            -FuGu

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            • #7
              Rate

              I'll give you a 7 dogg
              Inferno
              --Always blazing--


              So how many rappers do you know like this
              Always claimin' that they ride
              But they really turn bitch
              It don't make sense
              Either you a soldier from the start
              Or an actor with a record deal tryin' to play the part - Xzibit

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              • #8
                how this?

                Aiight thanx peeps, i'd rather you tell me when im whack, nice.

                Well i'll take this advice and how does this fit and smoke in your pipe.

                In my own crib i rap so fast i call a national comotion;
                Your so stupid your talking to pixies and believing perpetual motion;
                Its a coast to coast sid;
                To even to whisper or mention that my rhymes arn't toastin'.
                Everyday i win the rappin' championship;
                Now you'll catch me smokin' a cigar, blunt or a cancer stick;
                Make you sweat so much your pants will stick.
                So if you step to this, with my words i'll use verbal laserations;
                You'll *****s are so pussy like your on 24/7 masterbation;
                So this shit is for the nation;
                But created by me only so its my sole creation.

                Any betta?
                *****-D-V-S-*****

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                • #9
                  DAMN.......thats tha fuckin shyt i be talkin bout!!!!!! hella betta 10, just one last thing to make you complete....2 things........multiz, and length, then you'll b tha shyt like me! If you don't know what multiz are, hit me up Sephiroth6002 = AIM
                  “See to live is to suffer but to survive
                  well that's to find meaning in the suffering.” ~ D.M.X.

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                  • #10
                    this gets a 6......

                    peace

                    check out GOOD vs EVIL
                    playformore.org , One Year Millionaire Blog

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                    • #11
                      great improvement kid. keep it up.
                      Slaughterhouse II bring the beef when it's raw

                      http://fugu.hgmp.mrc.ac.uk/Images/fugu2.gif

                      "Tha only time you got ya crowd goin back and forth
                      is at ya gay peepshow when they jackin off."

                      "I could give a fuck about ya race
                      but if ya wanna be black I could shit on your face."

                      -FuGu

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                      • #12
                        That was like a whole new person from the first to the second verse, thats nice shit rite there...the first verse was kinda weak with short bars and weak vocab...but the second was a lot better, a lot better vocab which actually worked well...the only thing you need to do now is make your bars a little longer and use some Multi's. Keep up the good work.

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                        • #13
                          Yo thats hot

                          7 & thats for the least
                          peace men nice shit
                          Last edited by Intriquate; 08-07-2001, 09:10 AM.

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                          • #14
                            Thanx

                            Respect to all y'all that commented, im in a rush so i'll post another one up later...
                            *****-D-V-S-*****

                            *****-Dangerous-Vicious-Sick-*****

                            100% Real

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                            • #15
                              Keep it real

                              Yo Yo

                              My lyrical skills are so good they can beat anyone on this planet;
                              And their so fierce and restless you can't can it;
                              I drop freestyles at the drop of a hat, i don't plan it;
                              If i dont stop fucking cursing im sure they'll ban it;
                              I entered a walking competion and just ran it;
                              My styles so good i now struggle to walk;
                              Its being bitten so much that makes it hard to talk;
                              But all you fake ass *****s just squak;
                              As you'll parrots that just copy,do,say and follow;
                              Thats why your style ends up sounding hollow;
                              Whats so bad about keepin' it real and true to heart;
                              I know as i was there right from the start;
                              All these fake ass ***** do is play the part;
                              And fit into the image portrayed of us in the papers;
                              Thugs,Druggies,Criminals;G;Doggs;Badboys and rapers;
                              And whenever we break free and go agaisnt this all the record company do is cape us.....

                              Think about it people......
                              *****-D-V-S-*****

                              *****-Dangerous-Vicious-Sick-*****

                              100% Real

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