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    Ayo y'all, my name is PoiZonous ExiZtance. I do alot of emceeing around tha net. I belong to like 5 forums where I kick my shit. But ayo I just joined up here today, cause I heard it was tha best place to freestyle, battle, just whateva. So y'all make room for tha new emcee. Here's just a quick rhyme I wrote, it's kinda dark, I'm just in one of those moods. C'mon peeps welcome tha new guy and gimme feedback! Aight here it is:

    All the world ever feels towards me is hatred
    Don't touch me I'm sacred
    X Rated
    Never Noticed
    I'm Faded
    While Aerosmith keeps droppin gay ass shit like "Jaded"
    Sometimes I feel like this whole fuckin world is against me
    No one ever takes me seriously
    I used to hit things head on fearlessly
    But I became rejected by society
    I used to beg god to let someone notice me
    (Please!)
    It's like I've been infected with some kind of disease
    It was kind of hard to except myself
    When no one else would
    It was like no one knew how I felt
    So misunderstood
    I got tired of being an outcast
    The pain I felt was vast
    How insane I went
    I was aghast
    But I eventually accepted myself
    No matter how demented and disturbed
    I knew it was the only way the pain could be cured
    Look what you've done world
    Now I'm completely corrupted
    This is my story told
    But I've adjusted
    Here's a final statement
    Fuck it

    Well there it is, hope y'all enjoy it!
    Status:

    [ Lyrically Ripped Apart ]
    ~ Profanity
    ~ X-TACY
    ~ The Slick Jesus
    ~ DJ Scidazals

    [ Tha Hot Emcees ]
    ~ Prominant
    ~ The Invincible
    ~ Dark-Druid
    ~ PurpleHaze2701
    ~ Eyerone


    My Crew:

    [ Kurrupted Mindz ]
    ~ PoiZonous ExiZtance
    ~ Dark-Druid
    ~ Jehu

    [ Other Doggz ]
    ~ Cad
    ~ The Slick Jesus
    ~ Prominant
    ~ Lyrikally Lost
    ~ The Invincible
    ~ ShAdY D12 DiVa


    Signature:

    [ PoiZonous E. ]
    ~ I am the PoiZonous ExiZtance
    ~ Tha Toxic Death
    ~ I come here to slit wrists
    ~ To strip you of your every last breath

  • #2
    yo

    That shit was hot i was fellin the whole shit like the part about Aero Smith.
    I hope everyone else fells this shit like I do
    But i give you madd props for a newbie

    Holla Back!
    I Hope You Got Yourself A Gun

    7-4
    Wins
    Assasin912(3-0)
    IllZebra(3-0)
    shit spitter(3-0)
    Johnny Blazez(3-1)
    Xeroxl(3-0)*good battle*

    Losses
    Peel Junkie
    AK47
    goodson
    sikotik( rematch in the future)

    The Mercenary
    *****z Pay Me To Kill!!

    Comment


    • #3
      Anyone alive?

      C'mon people, someone else tell me whatcha think?
      Status:

      [ Lyrically Ripped Apart ]
      ~ Profanity
      ~ X-TACY
      ~ The Slick Jesus
      ~ DJ Scidazals

      [ Tha Hot Emcees ]
      ~ Prominant
      ~ The Invincible
      ~ Dark-Druid
      ~ PurpleHaze2701
      ~ Eyerone


      My Crew:

      [ Kurrupted Mindz ]
      ~ PoiZonous ExiZtance
      ~ Dark-Druid
      ~ Jehu

      [ Other Doggz ]
      ~ Cad
      ~ The Slick Jesus
      ~ Prominant
      ~ Lyrikally Lost
      ~ The Invincible
      ~ ShAdY D12 DiVa


      Signature:

      [ PoiZonous E. ]
      ~ I am the PoiZonous ExiZtance
      ~ Tha Toxic Death
      ~ I come here to slit wrists
      ~ To strip you of your every last breath

      Comment


      • #4
        La La

        Aye well for anyone who likes this I'ma be postin more shit today. If anyone wants to battle just PM me!
        Status:

        [ Lyrically Ripped Apart ]
        ~ Profanity
        ~ X-TACY
        ~ The Slick Jesus
        ~ DJ Scidazals

        [ Tha Hot Emcees ]
        ~ Prominant
        ~ The Invincible
        ~ Dark-Druid
        ~ PurpleHaze2701
        ~ Eyerone


        My Crew:

        [ Kurrupted Mindz ]
        ~ PoiZonous ExiZtance
        ~ Dark-Druid
        ~ Jehu

        [ Other Doggz ]
        ~ Cad
        ~ The Slick Jesus
        ~ Prominant
        ~ Lyrikally Lost
        ~ The Invincible
        ~ ShAdY D12 DiVa


        Signature:

        [ PoiZonous E. ]
        ~ I am the PoiZonous ExiZtance
        ~ Tha Toxic Death
        ~ I come here to slit wrists
        ~ To strip you of your every last breath

        Comment

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