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    hey this is the second flow I wrote last night, rate it and tell me how it is

    =JUST BRING IT=

    I'll verbally tackle you and give you a frown
    I'm a raw MC layin the smacdown
    Shootin off aduio missels and never missing
    Fast enough to knock you off track while you pissing
    Maybe you're a surfer that makes me a tsunami
    I know you aint Johny, so you aint layin on me
    Maybe your a house I guess I'm a tornado
    This aint a movie, you'll get flattened like play dough
    I'll verbally squash you like your a gnat
    I beat these MC's like 5-0's with bats
    If the mic was a guitar I would just string it
    But really its not so I should JUST BRING IT!

    lol, tell me how that was, thanks

    slick

  • #2
    Ya that was pretty good..
    Sounds better den da first one
    Now let the night be dark for all of me.
    Let the night be too dark for me to see
    Into the future. Let what will be, be.'

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    • #3
      ok

      your shit is ok just needs to be longer!
      girls (y'all a some god damn girls)
      why do you act this way? (why do you act this way, huh?)
      why do y'all act like fuckin sissies you pussies keep talkin shit behind my back you just some bitches for that and we all know (we all know)
      how fuckin cowards roll (keep rollin rollin rollin)
      and fuckin britneys who pretend to be down but as soon as someone calls you out you put your tail between your legs and bow down

      Fuck Bizkit

      DoggZ:

      X-TACY
      J-Dogg

      -------------battle stats-----------------
      WINS
      Chronic-X (3-0)

      LOSSES
      kk420(5-0)

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