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    Growin up a young child- wild and crazy
    every day a new pain that couldn't fade me
    lost some friends- some girls played me
    jealous ones Envy and critics degrade me
    people actin shady- but nothin could break me
    i was to strong- cuz thats how mom and dad raised me
    every since i was a baby- and now i see that- life is amazing
    and- nothin can phase me- no- matter what obstical is set before me
    i- aim for glory- pick up a pen and put- my pain in a story
    an- autobiographical tale of an emcee takin his time
    waitin to shine- lookin for the light as he's writin his rhymes
    usin lifes drama to- enlightin the times- got the word play to brightin his mind
    get you hooked as i tightin my line- i'm fishin for the destiny
    best- fish in the sea- wishin to be- the next- best emcee
    so- i keep my hopes alive and dive in- just to stay drivin
    rhyme to stay livin- this game is my ambition

  • #2
    Ive read through a few of your pieces today (you post too fuckin many to leave feed on all of em lol, slow down!) and ive gotta say youve got a lot of potential. Your just throwing everything out at once. Slow down a bit and refine and I think youll see the differences. For instance, one piece will have nice consistent multies for a few bars, whereas another will have impressive flow, and another will have a decent rhyme structure.. Its all good stuff though, just tryina help
    Taylor

    Adrenaline peaks when someone relevant speaks....

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    • #3
      Imma go with taylor on this one man.....you drop alot all out at once

      concentrate on individual pieces at a time and theyll really start to come together as a whole

      good drop man
      “If you keep coming back that only means you know you lost the fight...
      But their pride just won’t let em, insides like go get em
      and I’m just like, why you trying to fight momentum” EMINEM

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      • #4
        Good explanation of ambition. Some imagery or a fixed story line would be nice.
        The Silver Tounge Troublemaker

        I'm Kobe Bryant Ready

        With This Ego I Can Stand Here In A Speedo And Get Looked At Like A Fuckin' Hero.


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