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  • New Guy
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    Good explanation of ambition. Some imagery or a fixed story line would be nice.

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  • Lyrakil
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    Imma go with taylor on this one man.....you drop alot all out at once

    concentrate on individual pieces at a time and theyll really start to come together as a whole

    good drop man

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  • Taylor
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    Ive read through a few of your pieces today (you post too fuckin many to leave feed on all of em lol, slow down!) and ive gotta say youve got a lot of potential. Your just throwing everything out at once. Slow down a bit and refine and I think youll see the differences. For instance, one piece will have nice consistent multies for a few bars, whereas another will have impressive flow, and another will have a decent rhyme structure.. Its all good stuff though, just tryina help

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  • D'Evil1
    started a topic Ambition

    Ambition

    Growin up a young child- wild and crazy
    every day a new pain that couldn't fade me
    lost some friends- some girls played me
    jealous ones Envy and critics degrade me
    people actin shady- but nothin could break me
    i was to strong- cuz thats how mom and dad raised me
    every since i was a baby- and now i see that- life is amazing
    and- nothin can phase me- no- matter what obstical is set before me
    i- aim for glory- pick up a pen and put- my pain in a story
    an- autobiographical tale of an emcee takin his time
    waitin to shine- lookin for the light as he's writin his rhymes
    usin lifes drama to- enlightin the times- got the word play to brightin his mind
    get you hooked as i tightin my line- i'm fishin for the destiny
    best- fish in the sea- wishin to be- the next- best emcee
    so- i keep my hopes alive and dive in- just to stay drivin
    rhyme to stay livin- this game is my ambition

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