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  • Kind of a keystyle

    In the sense it has no real topic and I didnt plan shit when I started writing...

    They cant decipher this mind, because in sight they are blind,
    Answers that they all know they are still trying to find
    All those "enlightened" are liars, they just have lights in theyre eyes
    Only rich in the ammount of what they buy from these lies.
    They only see themselves in fractured images mirrors give,
    Sunken eyes or broken skin where pure brilliance didnt fit
    But they dont see it, the vision they see is innocent isnt it?
    Wish to be rid of the prison that theyre all living in, sinning in,
    Keep on giving in to plans that they know they did not write
    Want to change but will not fight, always thought they would not lie,
    Back and get robbed, but life has savaged their bodies,
    It has married their bones and fuckin ravaged their hobbies
    It has salvaged their lot, theyve lost theyre proudness to stop,
    Cause it has damaged them prop-ly with their habits for rock,
    And for them habits to stop, you gotta get on the right route
    Them dickheads living the high life, im just living my life dude


    All feed appreciated
    Taylor

    Adrenaline peaks when someone relevant speaks....

    www.myspace.com/taylorsmusicuk

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    Taylor

    I really like this piece, its nice to see people vent about what they see in society today, or at least thats what I gathered from it. The flow is tight, almost like ya just talkin right? I do alot of tracks where Im almost just talkin to the audiance. I feel ya gotta slow it down sometimes for people to grasp whats bein said. But yeah man, I like this alot. Nice piece
    “If you keep coming back that only means you know you lost the fight...
    But their pride just won’t let em, insides like go get em
    and I’m just like, why you trying to fight momentum” EMINEM

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    • #3
      Thanks man, appreciated. Yeah it is a kind of "directed" track, hence the steady flow, exactly as you put it, talking to the audience. I aint even sure how I ended up on that sorta vibe seeing as I started this one off about my inner workings.. maybe I aint meant to touch that topic yet lol. Thanks for the positive feed man
      Taylor

      Adrenaline peaks when someone relevant speaks....

      www.myspace.com/taylorsmusicuk

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      • #4
        no problem man, bumped ya rep as well
        “If you keep coming back that only means you know you lost the fight...
        But their pride just won’t let em, insides like go get em
        and I’m just like, why you trying to fight momentum” EMINEM

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        • #5
          dude i told you before you got some skill and this proves it, i love your freestyles,, i think that some of the freestyles on this board are gonna make somethin one day, and your one of em

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          • #6
            Thanks man, really appreciate it
            Taylor

            Adrenaline peaks when someone relevant speaks....

            www.myspace.com/taylorsmusicuk

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            • #7
              All those "enlightened" are liars, they just have lights in theyre eyes
              Only rich in the ammount of what they buy from these lies.

              ^ nice two bars right there, liked em' a lot.

              I'm taking it this is about crack addiction, if I didn't take it wrong. If I didn't then it's a verse nice potrayal of the struggle to try and be clean on such drug.

              Tell me if I'm wrong.
              The Silver Tounge Troublemaker

              I'm Kobe Bryant Ready

              With This Ego I Can Stand Here In A Speedo And Get Looked At Like A Fuckin' Hero.


              Got It?

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              • #8
                Your kinda wrong and kinda not. As I say, it had no real topic to start with, I got on the topic of how you can either live or be lived, and the crack bit just fitted well. Not necessarily crack, and if it was a proper verse, id have explained it better
                Taylor

                Adrenaline peaks when someone relevant speaks....

                www.myspace.com/taylorsmusicuk

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                • #9
                  yea i like this especially the last 4 bars in particular.... i wasnt getting the sort of talking flow until i read lyrakils post about and i re-read it and that mad it seem much better to me this is definitely some good shit...

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                  • #10
                    Thanks mate
                    Taylor

                    Adrenaline peaks when someone relevant speaks....

                    www.myspace.com/taylorsmusicuk

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