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  • Freestyle shit (takin shots at a few real emcee's)

    read this and try to figure out who i'm takin shots at, this is gonna be an introduction to my demo i'm makin, and no, it's not takin a shot at mims

    (Verse)
    Sick of emcee's smokin, killin, gettin money and rappin about cars
    it's all about bitch this hoe that- murder murder tryin to be hard
    all about how big the house is- what boat you got- livin like stars
    but still they wanna rhyme like- they still live in the same spot
    then you got these emcee's comin who just wanna name drop
    and when they got problems they wanna jump to the booth and blame cops
    talkin about the same shit every album til the flame stops
    had one good splash in the game like the first rain drop
    every album a new beat but they don't wanna change talk
    they find a new way to slang it but it's always the same walk
    they say they got fire but it's just a lame spark
    die out quick but still come back and claim it's all heart
    but- when i step in i aint gonna step out til the very end
    til i'm outta breath- outta steps to take and theres no ink left in the pen
    til the light shines on me and it's time for me to follow it
    but i hold my pride and ride forever- never swallow it
    keep my heart in the game til my soul is a hollow pit
    cuz--this---is---my---life and---i--aint---gonna---stop
    cuz---this---is---who---i---am--each and every drop
    and---this---is----the--way----i----rock
    cuz music is my savior and this is why i'm hot
    cuz i come with the sick shit- most twisted wicked spits every drop
    and i keep rhymin- spittin these lines and climbin til i hit the top
    spittin crazy rhymes in 80 lines from a crazy mind
    livin crazy times and they say maybe i'm---
    losin it but this music it's-- a way for me to stay together
    and keep my mind straight- so i don't break- my heart don't wether
    and every track i rap on- i just keep gettin better
    puttin fake emcee's in the shredder
    with an oath to be in the game forever
    so get ready cuz this is only the start
    and i'm about to bring it from the dark
    and eat up competition like a shark
    i'm a magic sharpie about to make my mark

  • #2
    uppin this

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    • #3
      nice spit.. really good actually..
      Everybody sound same; commercialize the game, reminiscing when it wasn’t all business.

      If Hip Hop should die, we die together.

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      • #4
        nice verse D

        you already know how much I hate the normal industry shit and love takin shots at it, so you know im feelin this shit
        “If you keep coming back that only means you know you lost the fight...
        But their pride just won’t let em, insides like go get em
        and I’m just like, why you trying to fight momentum” EMINEM

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        • #5
          its strait. sum points you flowed more than others. your rhyme scheme is good but i dont feel you perfected it yet but i feel like you gettin there. i mean the rhyme just prolly was written to a certain beat. dont get me wrong it flowed and i liked it but if this is the introduction to your demo you need a purely honest oppinion. i can tell you can go harder than this. this has to be the track to catch there attention you gotta spit strait flame from begining to end. i wanna see ya ya make it im far from a hater take a lil more time with this verse. but if you feel its perfect do what u do cause i cant tell u how to do u better than u know. feel me. keep elevatin. i look forward to your next post.
          Ay-yo my murderous rap verbal attack is actual fact/
          Tactical tracks match perfectly with graphical stats/
          Half a you lack the magical dap of tragical rap/
          That tackles you back and shackles and laughs at you/
          That's...the mathematical madness I'm on, the savage, the strong/
          The marriage, a bond of havoc and song/
          This massacre's on as if Picasso laced you/
          There's lotsa hateful skeletons locked/
          in the closet of my castle of Grayskull/
          I'm possum at grade school, that's why I have to debate you/
          My raps are like Capel, slashin' your face, you/
          That's how a master degrades you/
          I'm battlin' Jesus (hay-soos) if he passes through my label
          I'm snatchin' his halo/
          God I pray that you send my father back as an angel/
          Language is fatal and it's hypnotizin'/
          I'm only emphasizin', I'm still all about business and enterprisin'/
          I'm super lyrical, a brain boosts the chemicals/
          That's used contenicals inside of my mental projectable/
          big pun-super lyrical
          he one of the best defenilty up there with tupac and biggie



          ..::battle record ::..
          ..::1-2 ::..
          ..::wins ::..
          ..:: lyrically compact::..
          ..:: losses::..
          ..:: amode::.. good battle
          ..:: king of kb::.. close

          [/CENTER]
          shout-out to the one of the best this board has seen shadygirl i'll miss ya
          your rhymes were killer keep ya head up

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          • #6
            to be honest, i think you got whack flow, nice points discussed though and you used your emotion well.

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            • #7
              What your saying about some rappers is true but you need to turn it into punchlines instead of just saying it. Example instead of saying ''its all about what boat you've got'' you could say I'll float in a dingy while they sink in a yacht. llol.
              aka smokey

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              • #8
                They're talking alot of shit.. and walking the opposite..

                5Starr.. remember the name...

                ...The competition? Non existant. I'm above them,
                My kind of rhymer doesn't come a dime a dozen...

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                • #9
                  This was nice. Maybe the flow was a little out in places, but its definitely enjoyable. And worth recording
                  Taylor

                  Adrenaline peaks when someone relevant speaks....

                  www.myspace.com/taylorsmusicuk

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