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  • Lyrakils "How It Ends" piece reminded me...

    Just them fuckin crazy multies hes got in that drop... I aint even sure if I ever posted this here..

    Imagine an explosion detonated under an ocean,
    That turns every drop of water to a powerful potion,
    You feel it in your veins, taking over your rage,
    Kind of like your element, you open a page,
    You feel a hope your engaged to what your hoping to say,
    And you focus till its over and youve wrote what your brain,
    Has passed you over today, deep down you know its ablaze,
    With the fire that inspired you to flow in this way,
    Time to share, but your scared that youll choke on a stage,
    Throat feeling kind of croaky, mind all over the place,
    Once youve spoken you wait, for them to show theyre amazed,
    You fear that they wont cheer, it wasnt dope, it was lame,
    Get it together man you never show your in pain,
    Cause next time, my best rhymes gonna blow you away,
    And I aint quitting spittin till my home is a place,
    Up in the charts and your hearts, this shits not over till I say so

    All feed welcome and returned, try to check the piece about the 7year old kid who died n all, would appreciate it
    Taylor

    Adrenaline peaks when someone relevant speaks....

    www.myspace.com/taylorsmusicuk

  • #2
    Taylor

    Verse is sick man....i see how mine reminded you of this...the scheme is tight and the flow is nice too.

    Very nice piece man

    Impressive vocab, scheme is tight, flow is sick.....one of the best pieces overall Ive seen you drop yet
    “If you keep coming back that only means you know you lost the fight...
    But their pride just won’t let em, insides like go get em
    and I’m just like, why you trying to fight momentum” EMINEM

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    • #3
      Yeah it was your rhyme scheme and flow that jogged my memory, really like pieces like that. Thanks for your feed mate
      Taylor

      Adrenaline peaks when someone relevant speaks....

      www.myspace.com/taylorsmusicuk

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      • #4
        no problem man. Odds are if you post it, Imma read it. Ive become somewhat of a fan so far, though that sounds kinda weird and awkward. Oh well, I like ya style, and you as an artist. You write intellectually with some serious context to your work, both of which I truly appreciate from artists. Especially today when everything heard is mainstream with no real subject matter. Ive missed the inspiration that comes from other artists. Glad Ive found it again.
        “If you keep coming back that only means you know you lost the fight...
        But their pride just won’t let em, insides like go get em
        and I’m just like, why you trying to fight momentum” EMINEM

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        • #5
          Ill agree with that, I enjoy reading your pieces too, it is kind of a kick to read subject matter and quality similar to your own, and I always post in the threads here made by credible artists. I try to with all the new people as well, but draw the line at people who never leave feed back. I dont bother leaving feed in the regular "ima kill you in the face" rappers who pop up though, cba with that

          Keep em coming
          Taylor

          Adrenaline peaks when someone relevant speaks....

          www.myspace.com/taylorsmusicuk

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          • #6
            you too man
            “If you keep coming back that only means you know you lost the fight...
            But their pride just won’t let em, insides like go get em
            and I’m just like, why you trying to fight momentum” EMINEM

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            • #7
              ayo TAYLOR

              im outta here man, hitchya back next week after monday sometime

              late
              “If you keep coming back that only means you know you lost the fight...
              But their pride just won’t let em, insides like go get em
              and I’m just like, why you trying to fight momentum” EMINEM

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              • #8
                cya bruv
                Taylor

                Adrenaline peaks when someone relevant speaks....

                www.myspace.com/taylorsmusicuk

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                • #9
                  uppin cause its a sick verse and deserves more feedback
                  “If you keep coming back that only means you know you lost the fight...
                  But their pride just won’t let em, insides like go get em
                  and I’m just like, why you trying to fight momentum” EMINEM

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                  • #10
                    Nice verse Taylor. I get to hear "How it ends" a lot (good thing), so it was real easy to catch onto your rhyme and feel the flow. The first ten lines flow really well. Love the use of simple words and a simple rhyme scheme which is inviting rather than intimidating to read.

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                    • #11
                      Thanks again A few more pieces to come soon...
                      Taylor

                      Adrenaline peaks when someone relevant speaks....

                      www.myspace.com/taylorsmusicuk

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                      • #12
                        Taylor

                        ....she likes ya shit too yo
                        Last edited by Lyrakil; 05-28-2008, 02:27 PM.
                        “If you keep coming back that only means you know you lost the fight...
                        But their pride just won’t let em, insides like go get em
                        and I’m just like, why you trying to fight momentum” EMINEM

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                        • #13
                          Ah I c! Thought she spoke like she knew you in my other thread. Thanks to both
                          Taylor

                          Adrenaline peaks when someone relevant speaks....

                          www.myspace.com/taylorsmusicuk

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                          • #14
                            It's tight. Lots of aze rhyming but you used it well. Reminds me of "Lose Yourself". Thumbs up.


                            Rick.
                            The Silver Tounge Troublemaker

                            I'm Kobe Bryant Ready

                            With This Ego I Can Stand Here In A Speedo And Get Looked At Like A Fuckin' Hero.


                            Got It?

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                            • #15
                              This shit is hot. Dope multis. Gotta love flipping dope rhyme schemes.
                              P!

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