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  • Happy Memorial Day?!?!?

    this was said to me like 5 times yesterday and I just want to make it clear to those who might make the mistake of saying "Happy Memorial Day."
    youre nothin but a hypocrite
    tell me whats happy about mourning significant
    losses to insignificant causes
    yes this statement alone makes you sufficiently obnoxious
    and a bitch to my conscience
    and yes Im here in text in lit to spit you in context
    how this issue is nonsense
    and by lit i mean that class you skip that gets you in the office
    and by spit you i mean teach you but to reach is an obelisk
    an odyssey im not prepared to take
    Ill just compare you to my lost ones see their omniscients is great
    its just a little drop of irony in common senses lake.......


    THERES NO SUCH THING AS "HAPPY MEMORIAL DAY"
    Last edited by Lyrakil; 05-27-2008, 03:59 PM.
    “If you keep coming back that only means you know you lost the fight...
    But their pride just won’t let em, insides like go get em
    and I’m just like, why you trying to fight momentum” EMINEM

  • #2
    It's aight. Nothing bad, but maybe could be a little more entertaining. Perhaps I might like it better if it was a good audio. Other than that, you still got your point across.
    P!

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    • #3
      lame lmfao
      LOST
      THEN I NEVER WANT TO DIE
      I... I WANT TO LIVE FOREVER










      8.12.04

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      • #4
        this kid above stole his name from K-mart hes so fuckin creative and then has the audacity to call me lame

        back to that lack of intellect while bored huh j



        PANDEMIC

        thanks man, upped ya rep for the feedback
        “If you keep coming back that only means you know you lost the fight...
        But their pride just won’t let em, insides like go get em
        and I’m just like, why you trying to fight momentum” EMINEM

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        • #5
          *Will Feed Tonight*

          Upping This.
          Go Cubs! It's Their Season Baby!

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          • #6
            Lame? Loi....

            Not much more to say about this then the flows good, the multies and vocab are as always consistent in your rhyme and well put. I like the subject as well only for the fact its outspoken. I dont agree so much with it, but then surely they shouldnt say "happy memorial day"... it should just be memorial day for relatives to spend some time grieving in private. But as with everything..corporations etc..

            Nice read mate
            Taylor

            Adrenaline peaks when someone relevant speaks....

            www.myspace.com/taylorsmusicuk

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            • #7
              Ayo Vision

              thanks for the upps man, bumped ya rep
              “If you keep coming back that only means you know you lost the fight...
              But their pride just won’t let em, insides like go get em
              and I’m just like, why you trying to fight momentum” EMINEM

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              • #8
                Taylor

                as usual, thanks man....you always give nice feedback and insight.....much appriciated
                “If you keep coming back that only means you know you lost the fight...
                But their pride just won’t let em, insides like go get em
                and I’m just like, why you trying to fight momentum” EMINEM

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                • #9
                  This Was A Nice Well Thoughout Piece. You Had Some Good Emotion In There. Nice Little Storyline Throughout The Whole Thing And Everything Was Well Put Together And Easy To Follow So That's Always A Plus. Overall A Nice Piece With Not Really Any Mistakes.
                  Go Cubs! It's Their Season Baby!

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                  • #10
                    Vision

                    thanks for the feed man. Much appreciated. As stated above, I bumped ya rep yesterday.
                    “If you keep coming back that only means you know you lost the fight...
                    But their pride just won’t let em, insides like go get em
                    and I’m just like, why you trying to fight momentum” EMINEM

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                    • #11
                      LOST
                      THEN I NEVER WANT TO DIE
                      I... I WANT TO LIVE FOREVER










                      8.12.04

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                      • #12
                        Jmart

                        Hit Up Ya Pms To Find Out How I Know Your Name
                        “If you keep coming back that only means you know you lost the fight...
                        But their pride just won’t let em, insides like go get em
                        and I’m just like, why you trying to fight momentum” EMINEM

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                        • #13
                          you that was a fire verse. nice multis,punches,and overall fire dilivery. at first i was kinda lost with that first line i was doubtin the verse then i made the mistake of readin the next line where you started to spazz out. you are already one of my favorites. and what makes it so bad is that i was about say happy memorial day the other day but i thought about it and i was thinkin the same thing like i would stupid if i said that. lol
                          Ay-yo my murderous rap verbal attack is actual fact/
                          Tactical tracks match perfectly with graphical stats/
                          Half a you lack the magical dap of tragical rap/
                          That tackles you back and shackles and laughs at you/
                          That's...the mathematical madness I'm on, the savage, the strong/
                          The marriage, a bond of havoc and song/
                          This massacre's on as if Picasso laced you/
                          There's lotsa hateful skeletons locked/
                          in the closet of my castle of Grayskull/
                          I'm possum at grade school, that's why I have to debate you/
                          My raps are like Capel, slashin' your face, you/
                          That's how a master degrades you/
                          I'm battlin' Jesus (hay-soos) if he passes through my label
                          I'm snatchin' his halo/
                          God I pray that you send my father back as an angel/
                          Language is fatal and it's hypnotizin'/
                          I'm only emphasizin', I'm still all about business and enterprisin'/
                          I'm super lyrical, a brain boosts the chemicals/
                          That's used contenicals inside of my mental projectable/
                          big pun-super lyrical
                          he one of the best defenilty up there with tupac and biggie



                          ..::battle record ::..
                          ..::1-2 ::..
                          ..::wins ::..
                          ..:: lyrically compact::..
                          ..:: losses::..
                          ..:: amode::.. good battle
                          ..:: king of kb::.. close

                          [/CENTER]
                          shout-out to the one of the best this board has seen shadygirl i'll miss ya
                          your rhymes were killer keep ya head up

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                          • #14
                            myrical

                            thanks man, much appreciated....Ill be droppin some of my sickest shit ever early next week. Depending on how it turns out after Im done recording it with a shitty computer mic, no software for editing, and massive amounts of distortion, it may become the first audio Ive ever dropped publicly. Thanks for the detailed feedback man. Keep an eye out for ya. Late
                            “If you keep coming back that only means you know you lost the fight...
                            But their pride just won’t let em, insides like go get em
                            and I’m just like, why you trying to fight momentum” EMINEM

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                            • #15
                              Nice vocab.
                              Love, live life, proceed, progress

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