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    yo im prepared for bright lights ice and dames/
    but scared for the night life strife its strange/
    will i smile for ya sight ,but just hide my pain/
    or will i really be happy, like my pictures claim/
    a sense of fame, im built to go against the grain/
    most complain, and say it gets insane/
    i wonder what imma think when reach my lane/
    like will i lose my mind, or keep my brain/
    or will i use my time, to change the game/
    or will i forget my aim, or just make it rain/
    cuz its alotta acts, with tacky whack gimmicks/
    so i snap on track, and attack they rap image/
    im tommygunn for those of u who dont know/
    when i make it, myrical a name that wont show/
    but if i ever forget my mission for the leer/
    dont fear just make sure my career disapeer/
    Last edited by myrical; 05-29-2008, 04:28 PM.
    Ay-yo my murderous rap verbal attack is actual fact/
    Tactical tracks match perfectly with graphical stats/
    Half a you lack the magical dap of tragical rap/
    That tackles you back and shackles and laughs at you/
    That's...the mathematical madness I'm on, the savage, the strong/
    The marriage, a bond of havoc and song/
    This massacre's on as if Picasso laced you/
    There's lotsa hateful skeletons locked/
    in the closet of my castle of Grayskull/
    I'm possum at grade school, that's why I have to debate you/
    My raps are like Capel, slashin' your face, you/
    That's how a master degrades you/
    I'm battlin' Jesus (hay-soos) if he passes through my label
    I'm snatchin' his halo/
    God I pray that you send my father back as an angel/
    Language is fatal and it's hypnotizin'/
    I'm only emphasizin', I'm still all about business and enterprisin'/
    I'm super lyrical, a brain boosts the chemicals/
    That's used contenicals inside of my mental projectable/
    big pun-super lyrical
    he one of the best defenilty up there with tupac and biggie



    ..::battle record ::..
    ..::1-2 ::..
    ..::wins ::..
    ..:: lyrically compact::..
    ..:: losses::..
    ..:: amode::.. good battle
    ..:: king of kb::.. close

    [/CENTER]
    shout-out to the one of the best this board has seen shadygirl i'll miss ya
    your rhymes were killer keep ya head up

  • #2
    1st half was dope but the 2nd half i have heard before,

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    • #3
      1st verse has got a sick ass rhyme scheme and a pretty good story to follow

      dont think youre looking for criticism on the second verse so Im not leavin any

      overall rather impressive, very nice verse

      hope to see more
      “If you keep coming back that only means you know you lost the fight...
      But their pride just won’t let em, insides like go get em
      and I’m just like, why you trying to fight momentum” EMINEM

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      • #4
        feelin it good shit

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        • #5
          theres only one verse guys. that other one is my signature its a quote from big pun. but thanks for thr feedback.
          Ay-yo my murderous rap verbal attack is actual fact/
          Tactical tracks match perfectly with graphical stats/
          Half a you lack the magical dap of tragical rap/
          That tackles you back and shackles and laughs at you/
          That's...the mathematical madness I'm on, the savage, the strong/
          The marriage, a bond of havoc and song/
          This massacre's on as if Picasso laced you/
          There's lotsa hateful skeletons locked/
          in the closet of my castle of Grayskull/
          I'm possum at grade school, that's why I have to debate you/
          My raps are like Capel, slashin' your face, you/
          That's how a master degrades you/
          I'm battlin' Jesus (hay-soos) if he passes through my label
          I'm snatchin' his halo/
          God I pray that you send my father back as an angel/
          Language is fatal and it's hypnotizin'/
          I'm only emphasizin', I'm still all about business and enterprisin'/
          I'm super lyrical, a brain boosts the chemicals/
          That's used contenicals inside of my mental projectable/
          big pun-super lyrical
          he one of the best defenilty up there with tupac and biggie



          ..::battle record ::..
          ..::1-2 ::..
          ..::wins ::..
          ..:: lyrically compact::..
          ..:: losses::..
          ..:: amode::.. good battle
          ..:: king of kb::.. close

          [/CENTER]
          shout-out to the one of the best this board has seen shadygirl i'll miss ya
          your rhymes were killer keep ya head up

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