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  • "Doubt"- Ridiculous Rick

    My boss wants me to step up into a leadership role at my work, and I know I'm technically advanced enough to perfrom the job but, I guess my courage and realization of the fact that I'm held accountable for others upbring unsettles me. So in response to that is the below let me know if you've felt like this in anyway.


    "Doubt" - Ridiculous Rick

    Verse#1:

    With consumed overwhelming doubt, I bout,
    A speechless born debater chokin' to shout,
    Pausin' when they hit play, runnin' when they say stay,
    Their eyes are like laser rays, diggin' my grave,
    As I slip into there seeping hateful grasps,
    I drown the laughs with another hateful glass,
    I'm lettin' my enemies overcome my own self logic,
    Piercing stares lead me astray of my inital mission, I lost it,
    A teacher with no students, they pridefully abuse it,
    When your alone your leadership skills become truant,
    A self made inmate, who's choice it is to hesitate,
    Seen the rotten so he can't imagine seein' nothing great,
    A cynic in it to win it, makes no sense however you spin it,
    A student with no teacher stirred up with selfish vengence,
    A libary of books couldn't explain or even closely sprout,
    The perseverance that's weighed down by this doubt.


    Ending Comments:
    I know I've been flooding the board a bit but, when you get a flood of ideas you've gotta let the gates down. So I'm streaming steadly hopefully I don't disrubt the flow.
    Last edited by New Guy; 06-05-2008, 12:56 AM.
    The Silver Tounge Troublemaker

    I'm Kobe Bryant Ready

    With This Ego I Can Stand Here In A Speedo And Get Looked At Like A Fuckin' Hero.


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  • #2
    Rhymez - Another nice verse man. And another topic the masses can relate to. You gotta look at both sides of the coin on this one though, with more responsibility comes more pay....and I dont see any lyrics in this bitchin about makin more...lol. Nah but seriously, youre movin up....yeah theres more accountability...but still. Nothin wrong with climbin the ladder.
    “If you keep coming back that only means you know you lost the fight...
    But their pride just won’t let em, insides like go get em
    and I’m just like, why you trying to fight momentum” EMINEM

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    • #3
      One of the best verses I read by you. Nuff said.
      P!

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      • #4
        Thanks man although I feel your just telling me what I want to hear.

        *Note to self- make a song called "What I Want To Hear"*

        Thanks for the feed anyway.

        And yeah thanks Lyrickal, it's just a bitch man that you gotta put your neck out when no one else will. I guess that's what leaders do though.

        But do leaders die for cowards? Is what I'm asking.
        Last edited by New Guy; 06-06-2008, 12:43 AM.
        The Silver Tounge Troublemaker

        I'm Kobe Bryant Ready

        With This Ego I Can Stand Here In A Speedo And Get Looked At Like A Fuckin' Hero.


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        • #5
          leaders have been dying for cowards for thousands of years man.....they call those leaders heroes, soldiers, police, fireman....etc......and most of them die without notice
          “If you keep coming back that only means you know you lost the fight...
          But their pride just won’t let em, insides like go get em
          and I’m just like, why you trying to fight momentum” EMINEM

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          • #6
            Rhymez - First time I've read anything by you and I gotta say....WOW. Look forward to reading more. Really well put together and I agree with letting the gates down!

            I have definitely been in the same situation before, facing it at my current job once the office manager leaves in a month. The way I look at it is, if everything happens for a reason, what is the reason behind this one? Look at all your options and hopefully it's all for the best.

            Hope it works out for you.

            Mikayla

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            • #7
              True that. Thanks for the feedback and postive encouragement.
              The Silver Tounge Troublemaker

              I'm Kobe Bryant Ready

              With This Ego I Can Stand Here In A Speedo And Get Looked At Like A Fuckin' Hero.


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              • #8
                Originally posted by Rhymez_Internal View Post
                Thanks man although I feel your just telling me what I want to hear.
                *Note to self- make a song called "What I Want To Hear"*
                Thanks for the feed anyway.
                And yeah thanks Lyrickal, it's just a bitch man that you gotta put your neck out when no one else will. I guess that's what leaders do though.
                But do leaders die for cowards? Is what I'm asking.
                Not lying.
                P!

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                • #9
                  Where's our hero?, they lie only in films & written in comics,
                  Don't even wanna ask mama she only has negative comments.


                  Had to get the above down I'm gonna write a song called "Where's Our Hero?" about the obvious. Whenever I return to reality I'll let ya'll know how it works out.
                  Last edited by New Guy; 06-07-2008, 01:05 AM.
                  The Silver Tounge Troublemaker

                  I'm Kobe Bryant Ready

                  With This Ego I Can Stand Here In A Speedo And Get Looked At Like A Fuckin' Hero.


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                  • #10
                    I'm also going to write a song called "The Artist v.s.The Star" if anyone wants to help. Then thanks your a nice person.
                    The Silver Tounge Troublemaker

                    I'm Kobe Bryant Ready

                    With This Ego I Can Stand Here In A Speedo And Get Looked At Like A Fuckin' Hero.


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                    • #11
                      Mind checking my new piece? That would be nice if you did. You might not like the content, but I tried harder on it, even though I could still improve a lot.
                      P!

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                      • #12
                        I got you soon as I get off work.
                        The Silver Tounge Troublemaker

                        I'm Kobe Bryant Ready

                        With This Ego I Can Stand Here In A Speedo And Get Looked At Like A Fuckin' Hero.


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                        • #13
                          I like it.

                          I can't give too much feed... I'm a little high right now.
                          Love, live life, proceed, progress

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                          • #14
                            Liar!
                            P!

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                            • #15
                              Brilliant verse. What more can I say? The complexity and depth in this was brilliant. Your recent pieces have been really impressive, I.E thrift shop cute, this one, keep at it man. Seriously, the story conveyed in this was put together perfectly. I really enjoyed it
                              Taylor

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