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    Ridiculous penmenship spills rivers of ink
    Spittin' Saliva sand traps, you destined to sink
    Blankly blinking back, mouth mowed over in silt
    Who has the last laugh, never grieving in guilt...
    Test the toughest, can't best the buffest
    As flesh melts freely, I can't help but love it
    Shoulders slump shrugging, so depressed in ways
    I guess the slayer grows old even in the best of days...

    If it doesn't make sense...good.
    Last edited by Axis; 06-11-2008, 07:24 AM.
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  • #2
    depending on how you look at it I guess anyone could make some kind of sense of it.....

    but as far as the rhyme itself is concerned.....nice flow, nice scheme

    overall a nice drop as far as the rhymes are concerned. my opinion anyway
    “If you keep coming back that only means you know you lost the fight...
    But their pride just won’t let em, insides like go get em
    and I’m just like, why you trying to fight momentum” EMINEM

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    • #3
      It's cool for what it is.
      P!

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