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  • Crazy flow

    Ive typed it the best way I can to help you follow it, this flow is nuts. Came up with it last night, hope you can all pick it out (trust me, it works v v well)

    You havent lived a day less youve lived inside my brain,
    its different, my pain is visions
    it isnt life i made, or is it? guess i paid a visit
    to man made temptations and laid within them,
    its strange how the days will replay
    and you pay for the days you sinned in
    and if i played then it plays me the same
    so i just wait for the rain cause i aint just behaved a christain
    while i know that my heart has been close to pure,
    i also know that i chose to be lured,
    werent no ghostly spirits approach me
    and throw me in fire, i just chose to be bored
    but my soul cant afford to be frozen and thrown overboard
    i got shit to do, that i know to be sure
    i will grow till i soar and my vocals will pour
    to the hearts of the locals, I WONT see the floor
    Taylor

    Adrenaline peaks when someone relevant speaks....

    www.myspace.com/taylorsmusicuk

  • #2
    i got this....

    the flow is sick. seems as of late you are uppin your game. thats nice to see. your flows are comin out more like they just flow off the tongue with more consistency as of late and so far, the topics ive seen you post about are topics that more touchin on in todays world. Another Nice Flow T.
    “If you keep coming back that only means you know you lost the fight...
    But their pride just won’t let em, insides like go get em
    and I’m just like, why you trying to fight momentum” EMINEM

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    • #3
      Thanks man, appreciated definitely.
      Taylor

      Adrenaline peaks when someone relevant speaks....

      www.myspace.com/taylorsmusicuk

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      • #4
        This shit is hot. Nuff said. I'd like an audio of this.
        P!

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        • #5
          Thanks man, yeah I really want to get this down as well, will def be one of the ones on next studio visit

          Thanks again
          Taylor

          Adrenaline peaks when someone relevant speaks....

          www.myspace.com/taylorsmusicuk

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          • #6
            wow, your flow is amazing! I love the way you word and depict a pictures in a different manner than for instance saying 'take a step in my shoes'...

            "while i know that my heart has been close to pure,
            i also know that i chose to be lured,
            werent no ghostly spirits approach me
            and throw me in fire, i just chose to be bored"

            Love the way you put it!

            Mikayla

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            • #7
              Thankyou. I try not to make it look like im the only one with problems, im not that naive. So instead I try to put it in a way that others can relate to, and just sit back n hope it works.

              Thanks for the feed
              Taylor

              Adrenaline peaks when someone relevant speaks....

              www.myspace.com/taylorsmusicuk

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              • #8
                Bump
                Taylor

                Adrenaline peaks when someone relevant speaks....

                www.myspace.com/taylorsmusicuk

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                • #9
                  These's a lot of deep lines in this I thought were decent. Flow was cool. I thought it fell off & became watered down, at the end.
                  The Silver Tounge Troublemaker

                  I'm Kobe Bryant Ready

                  With This Ego I Can Stand Here In A Speedo And Get Looked At Like A Fuckin' Hero.


                  Got It?

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                  • #10
                    I'd really have to hear it audio to determine the crazy flow ya know? I mean, yea you can catch the drift of it, but for some reason I just feel I'm reading it "wrong".
                    Download my new mixtape "Public Axis Vol. 1" http://www.sendspace.com/file/7527jn
                    New Beats: www.soundclick.com/axisproductions
                    Mixing/Mastering available! PM for details.

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                    • #11
                      ^Real talk.
                      P!

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                      • #12
                        You havent lived a day less youve lived inside my brain,
                        its different, my pain is visions
                        it isnt life i made, or is it? guess i paid a visit
                        to man made temptations and laid within them,
                        its strange how the days will replay
                        and you pay for the days you sinned in
                        and if i played then it plays me the same
                        so i just wait for the rain cause i aint just behaved a christain


                        ^Fav. Part. The Whole Thing Was Nice And Yeah, It Def. Had A Nice Flow To It. Keep Them Coming Tay.
                        Go Cubs! It's Their Season Baby!

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                        • #13
                          ^Glad you didnt read it wrong as well. Thanks for the feed man, appreciated . Aint written much in a while but will try n keep up 2 date with what goes on in here n drop pieces when n where i write. Good 2 c u back around.

                          Thanks for feed all.

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                          Taylor

                          Adrenaline peaks when someone relevant speaks....

                          www.myspace.com/taylorsmusicuk

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                          • #14
                            Like some1 said before, overall it was ill but kinda slowed down near the end. Seems kinda fast paced as well.
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                            King $hit^^


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                            bootlegging is gods gift to us poor people sick of buying shitty cds

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                            • #15
                              Good read, really enjoyed it.

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