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  • "Missin' Your Voice"- Ridiculous Rick

    Yeah I don't know if I'm really feelin' this truely I wrote it last night but I was three sheets to the wind drunk. I was just watching old tape of some conversations, me and one of my lady friends were having back in the day, and I was truly disappointed in my chatacter back then.

    "Missin' Your Voice"- Ridiculous Rick

    Verse #1:
    Truely honestly I miss hearin' your voice,
    I try & put it by, but really I have no choice,
    Because it haunts me inside my soul within,
    And if we couldn't start over, I'd settle for friends,
    Foolish everythings made you & me drift ways,
    It's obvious to, just by the things I'd say,
    I wouldn't of liked me either, but your a believer,
    Ain't mad though because you needed to be freer,
    And freer's not even a word, it was that ubsurd,
    I couldn't give you the things that you truely deserved,
    I saw it in your eyes, but never snatched the prize,
    Didn't see the cure to the pure to help my vice,
    And now these words are spoken way to late,
    Better late then never am I to finally translate,
    That a fools poise of a boy crumbled a forever choice,
    Of an eternal love now I'm just missin' your voice.


    Love bird shit I know but feelings are feelings.
    Last edited by New Guy; 06-30-2008, 09:37 PM.
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  • #2
    its actually pretty decent man. seriously. portrays a state of events. and clearly shows that its not the big things you miss.....its always the little things. nice piece man, drunk or not....you write well. message came off clear.
    “If you keep coming back that only means you know you lost the fight...
    But their pride just won’t let em, insides like go get em
    and I’m just like, why you trying to fight momentum” EMINEM

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    • #3
      i enjoyed it.

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      • #4
        Yeah, I enjoy this shit. A little simple but it works really for some reason. Nothing really bad.
        P!

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        • #5
          Thanks I'll rep who I can
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          • #6
            "Idea"

            I come up with countless, dizzy, intangible ideas,
            But the biggest problem is gettin' people to see em',
            A painter of pain and insecurity that just won't hush,
            A painter with images in mind but left without a brush,
            Clutchin a palete that's plain blank with paint,
            Livin' a life that's distant and empty with faith,


            ^ keep that unless I'm so drunk that I think it's tight. Every songs my favorite right now.

            I'm a painter with no paint brush. Painting words is so much hard then images, because then people just have to look and intake. Words, ah man words.
            Last edited by New Guy; 07-11-2008, 12:52 AM.
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            • #7
              Pretty fresh dude.

              Only thing, re-word/re-write the bar "...freer isn't a word..." seemed corny compared to the rest of the verse...seeing how the rest was pretty serious...idk, to me it didn't fit.
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              • #8
                Good lookin' out I'll keep it in mind.
                The Silver Tounge Troublemaker

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                • #9
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                  The Silver Tounge Troublemaker

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                  • #10
                    And freer's not even a word, it was that ubsurd,
                    I couldn't give you the things that you truely deserved,
                    I saw it in your eyes, but never snatched the prize,
                    Didn't see the cure to the pure to help my vice,
                    And now these words are spoken way to late,
                    Better late then never am I to finally translate,
                    That a fools poise of a boy crumbled a forever choice,
                    Of an eternal love now I'm just missin' your voice.

                    Beginning Was Decent, But I Think You Picked Up More Emotion Towards The End And I Was Digging It Bro. Nice Little Piece. Nothing Wrong With A Soft Piece.
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                    • #11
                      not bad.
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                      • #12
                        "I wouldn't of liked me either, but your a believer" Thats a powerful line.

                        Overall this was a nice emotional piece. You should start showing the people you write about exactly what you write about them. You construe (i think thats the right word, probably not) so many emotions and feelings in your writing, but keep it all locked up from the people you need to show.

                        This was nice man.
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                        • #13
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