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  • pandemic
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    Taylor - Good looks on the feed.

    Axis - Word. I've been bumping that song a lot lately, so that's exactly where I got the inspiration from, I guess... loi

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  • Axis
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    Seemed like a forced version of Eminem's "Who Knew".

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  • Taylor
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    Yeah seems a little over done this one. But youve already told us your looking to settle into a style, and the only way to do it is to keep messing around n seeing what others think. The multies were nice, flow was alright too. Just wasnt feeling the concept that much. Keep at it mate

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  • pandemic
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    I find that it's a risk where I might have to force the rhymes and shit, but I definitely agree with you. I'll work on it.

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  • Lyrakil
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    ehhh.....not really feelin it

    the scheme and the multis are aiight, just not feelin the whole me me me shit

    and try to extend your rhymes into more lines, by that I mean make more than 2 bars at a time rhyme

    example:

    "...But you never gave a fuck in the first place! /
    Maybe that bitch fag was stuck in his worst days!"
    plucked from a cursed place
    and had the fuckin luck to be dumped on this earths face.....

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    Escape Artist (Concept Rap)

    Yo...
    I display shit that none of you saw... / I'm workin'
    on my whole album as I run from the law! /
    I'll be the only known star... / to never make
    a public appearance 'cause there's enough inference! /
    Why would I waste budget just dissin' your shitty flows /
    when I'll really kill fags for music videos?! /
    I'll even kill my own fans... / if
    they ever spill the beans like how I spill these known plans! /
    Will I be a bad influence? / ...Who knows?!
    I could your reflection and that's sad in a sense (innocence)! /
    See, your kid could shoot up a school... / you could
    blame me all you want 'cause I told him to do what was cool! /
    ...But you never gave a fuck in the first place! /
    Maybe that bitch fag was stuck in his worst days! /
    But I was just actin' here... / Your kid was
    lookin' up to a fake persona! I got you cats in fear! /

    Not my fault you wasn't watchin' him, suckers!

    Peace.

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