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  • "Nation Of Cliffnotes"- Ridiciulous RIck feat. Books

    Pretty deep song I wrote with my buddy I think it's pretty deep to let me know what you think.

    "Nation Of Cliffnotes"- R2 feat. Books

    Verse #1:
    Ridiculous Rick:
    Born proudly into this nation of cliffnotes,
    Last book I know or heard about was spoke,
    Didn't learn to read till atleast the 9th grade,
    Watchin' an infomercial on hunger wipin' steak off my plate,

    Books:
    Would be watchin' my clock, but my powers turned off,
    Can't help but feel under privliged, cause of the life I'm livin',
    Simoultanously recognizing potential,
    To proud to admit failure, so I am the misguided sailor,
    No time to rest, we are the blessed,
    Somehow we have created,
    A world with no doubt.

    Ridiculous Rick:
    Till we get our hearts ripped outside our mouth,
    Staring curiosly how will he live hearting pounding,
    It's easy we'll develop another shortcut founding.

    Hook:
    This here I hold in my fist is the jist,
    Broken down plainly even simple minds missed,
    I just need the run down version of what was spoke,
    Ridin a bike with broke spokes, livin in a nation of cliffnotes.

    Verse #2:
    Ridiculous Rick:
    Pridful owners of the universal control,
    Shameless & neglegent diggin' a universal hole,
    Struck stupid cueless when we hit rock bottom,
    Brighted eyed & bushy tailed while livin' in Gothem,
    Forget self improvement, and forget self dicovery,
    Give me some Zoloft, beer & watch me do me,
    Caught in crowds with magicians livin' in illusions,
    A country to busy makin' intrusions to wrap it's own brusin's,
    Can can someone come to earth we need a medic,
    See through the smoke screen yo it's gettin hectic,
    Can't make a decent salary, yet I'm surrounded in a gallery,
    Of diabetics suckin and chompin down sugar filled clories,
    When I'm drunk they say man your way to serious,
    No I'm just trying to figure out why your not furious,
    Nevermind it man just grab that univeral remote,
    Trapped angerly frownin' upon a nation of cliffnotes.

    Hook:
    This here I hold in my fist is the jist,
    Broken down plainly even simple minds missed,
    I just need the run down version of what was spoke,
    Ridin a bike with broke spokes, livin in a nation of cliffnotes.

    Verse #3:
    The people are busy scoutin' out America's next pop idol,
    No wonder we can't find a president to actually fit the title,
    And when spotlights do hit mics, there's no real insight,
    Just fabricated feelings airbrushed resting in dim lights,
    With romantics, filled with jazz music and soft sounds,
    I try to listen but can't hear past bombs hittin' the ground,
    The grounds are shakin', and our stomach's are quakein,
    Politicans lookin' in dictionaries for new ways to fake it,
    Sure you might be talkin big and over some guys head,
    But any fool knows when your stealing their health and bread,
    These's actions and problems seem clear and transparent,
    Yet the graphs increase each day on underage teen parents,
    If we were all Christians then atleast we'd all have our hope,
    Doomed to repeat history cause I only got the cliffnotes,
    My text book was smeared ripped up and caked high in dope,
    Something needs fixin, cause my heart, pride, and ambitions broke,
    The land of the free, land of glee, a nation of cliffnotes.



    Yeah I finished it instead. Got on a role and the story had to be told. I feel the first verse doesn't really fit well but I may fix it later.
    Last edited by New Guy; 07-11-2008, 01:10 AM. Reason: Tried to reformat didn't work well.
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  • #2
    I'm not sure what kinda beat you would ever plan on recording that on, but the scheme seems fucked to shit. That aside...

    It's pretty good, but just so I have it straight...is this message that we live in a world of Lazy/shortcuts??

    That's what I took out of it.
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    • #3
      Yeah you hit the nail on the head. My friend never writes to the line structure I do, I'm sure I could condence em' and they'd sound staight. Thanks man.
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      • #4
        I tried reformating it, but it's still fucked. I need to teach my friend how to write. But he insists he's outside the box and i don't get it. I don't think he does anyway he's more of a poet not a song writer. I added two lines I'll probably finish this soon, cause I'm on top of it like crazy.
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        • #5
          Yo, I finished the second verse. This has got shit for replies, I'll hook some other people up as soon as I get a chance I've just been kind of restless and jittery lately so my focus is jumbled but know I'll return the favor for the reads and replies I get.
          Last edited by New Guy; 07-02-2008, 02:18 AM.
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          • #6
            I know it's a long read but c'mon.
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            • #7
              Rick

              the depth of this is astounding, Mariana's Trench shit. Maybe the rhyme scheme doesnt work out too well but the message is one everyone needs to take a long hard look at. Im rather impressed at the amount of disastrous events (child pregnancy, lack of presidents....etc) youve managed to put into this piece. Nice read man, and nice to see someone sayin what truly needs to be said. Props on this, Im uppin ya rep if I can.
              “If you keep coming back that only means you know you lost the fight...
              But their pride just won’t let em, insides like go get em
              and I’m just like, why you trying to fight momentum” EMINEM

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              • #8
                ^ Thanks bro.
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                • #9
                  Yeah
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                  • #10
                    3rd verse shined over the rest imo. First 4 bars are strong man.
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                    • #11
                      haha i like this shit,

                      Can't make a decent salary, yet I'm surrounded in a gallery,
                      Of diabetics suckin and chompin down fat filled clories,
                      When I'm drunk they say man your way to serious,
                      No I'm just trying to figure out why your not furious,
                      Nevermind it man just grab that univeral remote,
                      Trapped angerly frownin' upon a nation of cliffnotes.


                      ^^I thought this was sick

                      The people are busy scoutin' out America's next pop idol,
                      No wonder we can't find a president to actually fit the title

                      that was a sick 2 bars too props on this piece....

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                      • #12
                        I need 2 spread rep before I give any back but good lookin out everyone, I think we should throw down a collab soon.
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                        • #13
                          Up
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                          • #14
                            "A country to busy makin' intrusions to wrap it's own brusin's," I like. Yeah dope track, flowed well, nice lines throughout. Good job
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                            • #15
                              ^
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