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"Nation Of Cliffnotes"- Ridiciulous RIck feat. Books

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  • New Guy
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    Thanks?

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  • Taylor
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    No problem...... smh

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  • New Guy
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    ^

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  • Taylor
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    "A country to busy makin' intrusions to wrap it's own brusin's," I like. Yeah dope track, flowed well, nice lines throughout. Good job

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  • New Guy
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    Up

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  • New Guy
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    I need 2 spread rep before I give any back but good lookin out everyone, I think we should throw down a collab soon.

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  • Guest's Avatar
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    haha i like this shit,

    Can't make a decent salary, yet I'm surrounded in a gallery,
    Of diabetics suckin and chompin down fat filled clories,
    When I'm drunk they say man your way to serious,
    No I'm just trying to figure out why your not furious,
    Nevermind it man just grab that univeral remote,
    Trapped angerly frownin' upon a nation of cliffnotes.


    ^^I thought this was sick

    The people are busy scoutin' out America's next pop idol,
    No wonder we can't find a president to actually fit the title

    that was a sick 2 bars too props on this piece....

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  • Axis
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    3rd verse shined over the rest imo. First 4 bars are strong man.

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  • New Guy
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    Yeah

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  • New Guy
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    ^ Thanks bro.

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  • Lyrakil
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    Rick

    the depth of this is astounding, Mariana's Trench shit. Maybe the rhyme scheme doesnt work out too well but the message is one everyone needs to take a long hard look at. Im rather impressed at the amount of disastrous events (child pregnancy, lack of presidents....etc) youve managed to put into this piece. Nice read man, and nice to see someone sayin what truly needs to be said. Props on this, Im uppin ya rep if I can.

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  • New Guy
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    I know it's a long read but c'mon.

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  • New Guy
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    Yo, I finished the second verse. This has got shit for replies, I'll hook some other people up as soon as I get a chance I've just been kind of restless and jittery lately so my focus is jumbled but know I'll return the favor for the reads and replies I get.
    Last edited by New Guy; 07-02-2008, 02:18 AM.

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  • New Guy
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    I tried reformating it, but it's still fucked. I need to teach my friend how to write. But he insists he's outside the box and i don't get it. I don't think he does anyway he's more of a poet not a song writer. I added two lines I'll probably finish this soon, cause I'm on top of it like crazy.

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  • New Guy
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    Yeah you hit the nail on the head. My friend never writes to the line structure I do, I'm sure I could condence em' and they'd sound staight. Thanks man.

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