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    I was a young loner growing up in dirty J
    I didn't have any direction, was wasting my life away
    Then my pops decided to throw me on the street
    There were days at a time I had nothing to eat
    So I drifted quietly from coast to coast
    With no one to love, no where to call home
    Then I got in the business that would change my life
    I'd be a drug dealing, bitch smacking pimp by night
    And a heroic fireman by the sight of light
    I'm fighting them flames with my fire hose
    And I'm getting cash money from some dirty ho's
    "What the hell?" you might think
    As I bust a nut in your grape flavored drink
    Now I have a sudden interest in tight ass rhymes
    I'm all up in your face with my pack of mimes
    Ciggy Tardust Mime Crew, we're better than you
    'Cause we stay cool while watching scooby doo
    We have our bag of special "scooby snacks"
    We blow smoke in the face of fools that are whack
    Yeah, word. Ciggy Tardust Mime Crew represent. There be more of us coming.
    Last edited by ciggyxtardust; 07-05-2008, 01:06 PM.

  • #2
    way too simple.
    I rap.

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    • #3
      Read it out loud, it doesnt really flow

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      • #4
        you guys are just jealous of my mad skills.

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        • #5
          Was enjoying it until you completely switched the mood with some sort of freestyle. The rhymes are rather simple though, but it could be ignored with certain topics like the one you started off with. Anyways, big ups compared to the shit you dropped a few days ago.
          http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/3100/spshitll0.png
          King $hit^^


          Originally posted by grizzyp
          bootlegging is gods gift to us poor people sick of buying shitty cds

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          • #6
            Originally posted by Kid Ka$h View Post
            Was enjoying it until you completely switched the mood with some sort of freestyle. The rhymes are rather simple though, but it could be ignored with certain topics like the one you started off with. Anyways, big ups compared to the shit you dropped a few days ago.
            thanks im improving gradually i guess. maybe in a couple of weeks ill spit rhymes as good as tupac.

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            • #7
              Clearly he is just doing this for shits n giggles...
              Download my new mixtape "Public Axis Vol. 1" http://www.sendspace.com/file/7527jn
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              Mixing/Mastering available! PM for details.

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              • #8
                The first 6 lines are decent. But then the subject matter drops.
                The Silver Tounge Troublemaker

                I'm Kobe Bryant Ready

                With This Ego I Can Stand Here In A Speedo And Get Looked At Like A Fuckin' Hero.


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