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    My chest feels heavy, and my lungs can barely breathe
    Concernin' my mind with you, the thoughts rarely leave
    It took a while, but I firmly believe I love you
    Even when you blatantly turned down my requests to hug you
    A bold black man who never waited for anyone
    The pastoral skies who debated the city sun
    You did your own thing, and you're not afraid to speak ya mind
    I found you repulsive at first, but couldn't help but repeat ya lines
    The lifestyle you lead isn't one I should follow
    The idea of smokin' weed wasn't one I could swallow
    Yet you have a way with words, and I found myself in ya car
    Windows rolled up, you're encouragement only helpin' my heart
    I can't forget your happiness when I inhaled the smoke
    Or your expressed laughter when I didn't fail to choke
    But besides your inner gangsta, you won't admit you have a soft spot
    The side that shines when we just talk in the parking lot
    The stories you told, and the countless times you just listened
    Or the times you gave me advice when my life was shiftin'
    The jokes you told seem to make the bad times a mirage
    Can't forget when you gave me a dollar-ninety-six back massage
    Even when life seemed to suck, you were there to make it better
    Although you're a bad influence, I couldn't hate you ever
    I couldn't tell you this, however in some ways you feel the same
    I know while I was away it caused pain to say my name
    Everything reminds me of you, I wish you weren't stuck in my head
    I'm not ready to part ways, I wish I could just fuck what was said
    Never been angry at you, fights, we had them barely
    Wanna get ya voice out my head, but I've adopted your vocabulary
    You're like my big brother, and I'm afraid to lose you
    I never expected this, and it hurts that time just flew through
    I miss being called names out of play, what a treasure
    And believe it or not, I've found myself missin' ya peer pressure
    Just don't forget our plans, and please don't disappear
    I can't handle another goodbye, so please jut stay here
    Last edited by Symptom; 07-16-2008, 07:51 PM.
    Love, live life, proceed, progress

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    not bad, could change up some wording to make the scheme better and better the flow, but not bad.
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    • #3
      Thanks for the advice.
      Love, live life, proceed, progress

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      • #4
        Whoa what's up Symptom? Didn't know you were still around the board. But like dude said before the scheme is off a bit at times, but it isn't a bad drop at all. Just maybe a bad choice of words here and there. I usually jot things down w/o a beat and work on the scheme with a decent paced beat once it's complete. I can't concentrate if I write to a beat lol.
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        • #5
          I liked it. So are you smokin' weed nowdays? Cause I remember you were like a DARE spokesman back in the day. Overall a nice story and good display of emotion. It's a trip on how things change, I was reading a load of songs we wrote back in the day.

          You've remained staedy paced.

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          • #6
            I don't smoke weed regularly; I haven't had any in a month. I want to smoke again, and have been lookin' around. So I guess.

            Yeah. I've changed so much these past few years. I'm like a new person, but not really at the same time. It's kind of weird, but I'm so comfortable with who I've become that I couldn't see myself living any other way.
            Love, live life, proceed, progress

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