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    spark all the philies and pass the dro/
    we all remarkable in all ways possible/
    time to elevate n' grow to hights unknown/
    my flow has grown to only one place known/
    to man, above all i hold the croown/
    if life was a gun i'd be the finger that pulls the fun-trigger/
    my digits bigger then the c.n. tower escalater/
    i dont teach hate i just inspirate fate/
    step face to face n' get ate lika cake/
    my beratta so heated it'd burn a whole through a fetus/
    n' thats the closest you'll get to life before death/
    but n' your case we can call it n' expiration date/
    fuck peace-n' beat yo meat!!!/(haha)


    wrote this up quick, hit me up wit some feedback!!!

  • #2
    nice rhyme dawg............keep writing
    ILLeSt oN MiCs

    Mex
    Erratic
    BrickCity
    Mental Nightmare
    Dominion
    Baby Devil I.O.M's Che3rleader
    Killuminate
    R-izzy


    I.O.M





    Battle Record: 9wins 2loss 4KO

    DEFEATED


    Lit
    Capital T
    I.K.
    Narcotic Python (KO)
    the emcee falcon (KO)
    MC Dean (KO)
    Payne (KO)
    Lil (no show)
    Jay 'anims (forfeit)





    shout outs

    Tenessee
    Rip~Da~Jacka
    D GreE
    InfiniteEclipse
    noone
    Shadys Laday
    RealPlatoon
    all the emcee's that are ILL, you'll make it someday
    I.O.M, ya'll are DOPE



    email me at- [email protected]


    "I don't speak spanish, but in the language of rap, i'm fluent"
    -mex"



    crew battle record:1-0 defeated LVC

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    • #3
      you thanks homie, i read ur post bout you leavin, i got a friend in the same position... its tough man, i hope you pull through it.

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      • #4
        thanx man
        ILLeSt oN MiCs

        Mex
        Erratic
        BrickCity
        Mental Nightmare
        Dominion
        Baby Devil I.O.M's Che3rleader
        Killuminate
        R-izzy


        I.O.M





        Battle Record: 9wins 2loss 4KO

        DEFEATED


        Lit
        Capital T
        I.K.
        Narcotic Python (KO)
        the emcee falcon (KO)
        MC Dean (KO)
        Payne (KO)
        Lil (no show)
        Jay 'anims (forfeit)





        shout outs

        Tenessee
        Rip~Da~Jacka
        D GreE
        InfiniteEclipse
        noone
        Shadys Laday
        RealPlatoon
        all the emcee's that are ILL, you'll make it someday
        I.O.M, ya'll are DOPE



        email me at- [email protected]


        "I don't speak spanish, but in the language of rap, i'm fluent"
        -mex"



        crew battle record:1-0 defeated LVC

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        • #5
          my thoughts

          my beratta so heated it'd burn a whole through a fetus/
          n' thats the closest you'll get to life before death/


          i like that line. overall, shit was good. keep elevatin. peace.
          ~~~2 X PLiCiT aka Shockwave~~~
          "SHOCK 2 THA SYSTEM"
          LOOK FOR THE ALBUM THIS SUMMER!

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          • #6
            yo thanks for the feedback homie, much love... uppin fo mo!

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            • #7
              yo amode yo shit getting tighter
              this was good dawg
              i liked it
              keep elevatin
              Ay-yo my murderous rap verbal attack is actual fact/
              Tactical tracks match perfectly with graphical stats/
              Half a you lack the magical dap of tragical rap/
              That tackles you back and shackles and laughs at you/
              That's...the mathematical madness I'm on, the savage, the strong/
              The marriage, a bond of havoc and song/
              This massacre's on as if Picasso laced you/
              There's lotsa hateful skeletons locked/
              in the closet of my castle of Grayskull/
              I'm possum at grade school, that's why I have to debate you/
              My raps are like Capel, slashin' your face, you/
              That's how a master degrades you/
              I'm battlin' Jesus (hay-soos) if he passes through my label
              I'm snatchin' his halo/
              God I pray that you send my father back as an angel/
              Language is fatal and it's hypnotizin'/
              I'm only emphasizin', I'm still all about business and enterprisin'/
              I'm super lyrical, a brain boosts the chemicals/
              That's used contenicals inside of my mental projectable/
              big pun-super lyrical
              he one of the best defenilty up there with tupac and biggie



              ..::battle record ::..
              ..::1-2 ::..
              ..::wins ::..
              ..:: lyrically compact::..
              ..:: losses::..
              ..:: amode::.. good battle
              ..:: king of kb::.. close

              [/CENTER]
              shout-out to the one of the best this board has seen shadygirl i'll miss ya
              your rhymes were killer keep ya head up

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