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    Hey this is my new song im gettin close to gettin finished its only gonna be a two verse song because that first verse takes about 1 minute and 50 seconds to do wit the beat i got but check it gimme some feedback PEACE.

    I pull guns on nuns but my clips filled wit none//
    Shot one into my tongue now I spit bullets for funds//
    Hot spits come out hot quick slippin thru my lips-n-my-gums//
    Trippin on my dick and slippin on my spits twistin like a cyclone//
    Tongue twisters come quicker then some liquor gets your mind blown//
    Hydro and my tight flowin will get your blood inside goin//
    I might blow it wit my next line but my rhyme wont show it//
    Skills im scheming from the demon inside my cerebrum//
    People in battles I beat Ďem treat Ďem like a bitch eatin my semen//
    I see men dreamin screamin for a chance to be me when I beat Ďem//
    Im a lunatic who managed to cause punitive damage on a damn rampage//
    Wounded you but fixed it wit a band aid now yalls my damn slaves//
    My crayon breaks and my hand aches I cant finish my song for damn sakes//
    Fuck it Ill just wing it wit blood from my pinky and the main frame of my brain//
    My Styles are eccentric demented face fucked like I fell on some cement kid//
    Im relentless my skills are endless this song may never be ended//
    I see all you fakes pretendin you can write ten songs in ten seconds//
    thatís why my shits tight yours wack and im white color donít mean shit right//
    thatís why I get straight dissed and dre got rich and since im white im a played off bitch//
    Another wannabe eminem but I donít wanna be him or him//
    Im just me and my split personality so what im not allowed to be an emcee then//
    Yeah I got issues but schizophrenic donít end it psychopathic sarcastic still not the last shit//
    But I wont list all that shit cause thatís cause to get blasted//
    Laughed at people sayin thatís only half rap thatís wack//


    Riggety raggedy my skills are only half of me//
    People laugh at me swing bats at me tryin to make me an absentee//
    But I grab the bats and bash their knees have em askin please//
    Drastically askin me to cut em slack happily like the Iraqis weíre attacking//
    So Its time to surrender let your memory always remember me//
    And remember youíll never be at the same level as me or never act as devilishly//
    You get feverish when you see my ish but youíll never beat my shit//
    Treat my spits as a precious gift and let the pressure lift while you listen to my precision hits//
    Cause my precisness is priceless like a bi bitch with a tight clit//
    I know youíll try-and-write-a-white-diss but donít cause i know youíll like this//
    Like if I write a White Stripes diss, tryin fight a dyke bitch, or fight Mike Tyson//
    Psych, but I might take your ninth life wit my wifeís knife into your right eye son//
    By the time Iím done Iíll have you pissed and you wont buy none//
    Die like Pun by my gun loaded wit lyrical bullets and light funds//
    ThaOddity

  • #2
    nice

    nice, i felt it. especially the line....

    "thatís why I get straight dissed and dre got rich and since im white im a played off bitch//
    Another wannabe eminem but I donít wanna be him or him// "

    im looked upon that way by many too. the rhyme scheme almost sounded like it came out The Slim Shady LP. good job tho. finish it up and record it, i'd like to hear. by the way, im a producer too if you ever need a beat. i like your style.
    ~~~2 X PLiCiT aka Shockwave~~~
    "SHOCK 2 THA SYSTEM"
    LOOK FOR THE ALBUM THIS SUMMER!

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    • #3
      2 Xplicit

      Yo 2 Xplicit I actually do need some beats but cant get into the studio here lately so yeah that'd be cool if you could hook me up
      ThaOddity

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      • #4
        email me

        how bout this...ima be out of town until saturday but i might still be checkin email and workin on beats. hit me up at [email protected] and tell me what kinda beat you lookin for, or send me some lyrics and i'll make somethin for it. workin on my own shit right now too, so i'll probly just hook you up with one of my already completed ones right now. holla.
        ~~~2 X PLiCiT aka Shockwave~~~
        "SHOCK 2 THA SYSTEM"
        LOOK FOR THE ALBUM THIS SUMMER!

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