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    long story short my ass got dragged into some modeling competition and i actually advanced to finals where they got talent show section so of course im ganna rap cuss thats what i do. didnt really want to go all out lyrically cuss this is in the mall i don't want to loose cuss it went over peoples heads plus u only get like 45 secs or some gay shit so its not a full 16 bars. my main goal was to make sure it had dope flow. i did it to I put on beat. wow i kinda went off on rant but yeah just tell me if u feelin or not.

    When they hear me spit my lyrics/
    they say rothus on some other shit/
    slicin threw the competition,/
    no concern for other shit/
    no return,i will burn, my spit is nitroglycerin/
    lyrics speedin off the tounge keep u people listin/
    When rippin runways, lyrically im killin it/
    beatin beat belligerent, my soul n guts im spillin it/
    all the points im hittin it,get live if u feelin it/
    come and get a lil hype baby if u feelin it/
    rappers claim they goblins,whats goblins to peter parker/
    i can bring light, or make the sky go darker/
    with all my heat, u can call me fire sparker/
    leavin my mark like the mic was a marker/

  • #2
    how old are you?

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    • #3
      17 why?

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      • #4
        I wouldn't swear.

        Seeing how it's modeling, I'd assume the cleaner, the better...but I have no knowledge of modeling competitions. G/L
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        • #5
          Originally posted by Axis View Post
          I wouldn't swear.
          Seeing how it's modeling, I'd assume the cleaner, the better...but I have no knowledge of modeling competitions. G/L
          yeah im just ganna censor myself or throw somethin else in its place.

          and i have no knowledge of modeling competitions either lmao. started as a joke but i figured id ride joke out if i can make some money from it.

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          • #6
            well the fact that in 7 bars, you rhymed 2 of them with the same word, tells me that you're worthless
            LOST
            THEN I NEVER WANT TO DIE
            I... I WANT TO LIVE FOREVER










            8.12.04

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            • #7
              ahaha ill throw that under not feelin

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              • #8
                lets hope your a pretty lad aye

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                • #9
                  idk if you wanna start out the same way as Jeezy on put on...

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