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    this society that i live in im never gonna give in
    to the police who tell me to get to my knees
    and arrest me for disturbing the piece
    when in real life im just being me
    a normal huming being
    so i dont see where we disagree
    all we know in life is that death is guarenteed
    so stay high and puff the weed
    and still scream fuck the police
    cause they try to sieze everything we own
    n now they tapped all of my phones
    im just a seventeen year old kid with a dream
    but fate is unknown so i live life so curious
    when i spit im so furious
    cause im like a dog in a cage with so much rage
    that i could just tare anyone apart
    but im smart and dont release it
    i keep it concealed in my mind and just increase it
    till i cant take it anymore
    then i just let it pour out my throat into the microphone
    let it rip up the track like a cyclone
    till im done i drop the mic and let the chorus take flight

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    Nice spit though you should try to use a more complex vocab and more multies, the structure was a lil simple but it's good for being one of your first posts. Keep improvin' boy.
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    • #3
      thats good man....i havent read anything else u have done...but by the looks of that, i think ur pritty good

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