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    I suggest, that you stop fuckin with tha west, before i lay that ass to rest, I dont fuck around, its time to put it down, bring it on, so that I can clown, your bitch ass with a smack, you will never think about bustin back, my mind is filled with serious anger, looking to spit shit, from the hip, im not knowin but at anytime I could flip, im just a young motherfucka causing drama, while they sustain massive head trauma, rockin,shockin


    I need sum help.... what yall think????

  • #2
    extend your vocab and fix your bar structure...you have a very simplistic rhyme scheme, but keep postin you'll improve,and it cant hurt, you can only get better. pEAce
    -PhEaR aKa FeArMeNtOr
    ..RhyMeLiFe.CoMz LeaGue ChaMp..

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    • #3
      Try not to settle for any thing that just pops in your head.

      Try to think of something funny, cruel, hard-hitting...
      then put it to rhyme.
      If you come across any innovative words, use 'em...

      Keep doing it, and later, shit will come to you faster and it'll be easier
      this joke : how many hiphoppers does it take to screw in a lightbulb? .................. three, one to screw in the new lightbulb, and two to argue over how much better the old one was.

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      • #4
        yea...dont think of the first thing that pops in your head...especially if your name is "BizarresBitch" people are gonna expect crazy-ass rhymes from you if you have any relation with Bizarre....haha...

        ONE!
        I Got The Hail Mary Diss...he he he...

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