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    the last shit i spitted was kinda shit/
    i needed to make my lines long a bit/
    i tried your advice they dnt wrk not a bit/
    look at me know still whack as shit/
    i wnted to make yall tick/
    and bounce along wen u read dis shit/
    i dreamed of peeps readin mags with MY shit in it/
    i dreamed of being good/
    like im from the hood/
    i wanted yall to like men like u like ur food/
    as u can c dat'll never happen/
    i wnted to b good/
    mabe at rapping!/
    i wanted to be tasty like a cheese flan/
    i wished it all/
    i DID have a plan/
    buts its all gone to pieces/
    like guys forkes nite/
    wen u burns stuff wood toys and fleeses/
    i should do as u say
    finish now finish dis shit an take my last bow.
    Last edited by MrsShady; 08-11-2001, 07:32 AM.
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    hey tell me wot u think!! i really wnt to know!!
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    SPANK MEH!

    [color= red] GO ON, I DARE YA![/color]




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    • #3
      Dont ever give up....Thats tha #1 Rule......No matter what dont give up.Keep writin,Ya see ur problem is..........

      Your vocabulary use is real poor.Every other word was plan ,shit, and simple words like that.Add some metaphors and some good word use and a good concept and you should be fine.But keep writin and get more creative,Dont give up....

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      • #4
        thanx for dat but i dnt care wot the number 1# rule is i cant nuttin but give up! i cnt write i dnt know how! i need help, im so rubbish i mite as well find somone to TEACH me how to rap.
        *~CHINK GIRL FO LIFE!*~

        http://sugadolls.homestead.com/files/sci21.gif

        http://www.angelfire.com/pa4/cooldoll/images/sil33.gif

        SPANK MEH!

        [color= red] GO ON, I DARE YA![/color]




        wheres ma Mr. Right?

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        • #5
          Lol.....

          Na,Dont quit.Just get creative.Rap about real life shit that ppl can relate to.Take a page out of ur life and write about it.But dont write about nothin happy and shit,ppl cant relate.Just be more creative and use bigger words ya dig?

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          • #6
            my life aint interestin! i live in england and its borin! all the stuff i want to write about peeps wrote about it already!
            *~CHINK GIRL FO LIFE!*~

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            http://www.angelfire.com/pa4/cooldoll/images/sil33.gif

            SPANK MEH!

            [color= red] GO ON, I DARE YA![/color]




            wheres ma Mr. Right?

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            • #7
              hey controversial! i jus read wot u said to miss thang! wot the fuck u go do dat for? i aint ready to battle!! are u mad or summin? jus look at my rymes.....LOOK AT THEM!! do they look good enough to batle to you? if i battle her ill DIE!!

              thanx alot!!
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              http://www.angelfire.com/pa4/cooldoll/images/sil33.gif

              SPANK MEH!

              [color= red] GO ON, I DARE YA![/color]




              wheres ma Mr. Right?

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