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    shit im new to dis biz, and i need yall feedback.. thanx


    Bustin up the ally's wit some guy lurkin,
    im like Kavorkian puttin u to sleep smirkin,
    Zilla the king wit the memory still reworkin
    iv gone workin on methods to give u recursins
    like the wind swift but never stale,
    thinkin on a plan to get u outa jail,
    ill buy ur bail to c u scwerm wit no remorse,
    an empty scale u jacked, now i c u convulse,
    over ded on coke u got sale in grosse,
    ur pupils are wide this is my diagnose,
    u gonna die fo sho u came too close,
    took 7 doses when u only should have taken 1,
    ur eyes are blood red ur as baked as the sun,
    this sh1t is fun watchin u scream at first,
    die b1tch! blood stream begins to thinly disperse, thats the worst word, "uh fuk?"
    "sh1t u in it fo good!" yelled the clerk,
    from an old shop sayin butcher work,
    "ha ha a brawney onery kid, if u did cid u might have lived"
    but its too late ur floatin up to heaven,
    ur thinkin, " ah geeze, now i believe!!" and dat relieves ur tension,
    goin straight to cloud nine not eleven,
    but wait theres Es wit deamons of seven,
    hey buddy ur goin down to satan not up to heaven, u gonna be on da burny rack payin,
    Clip go ur feathered wings as u fall back at earth, re-live ur birth, now ur unearthed,
    not only cursed fallin on the devil hmslf,
    u aint goin back up to dat cozy ice shelf,
    ur burin wit me,lucifer,da masta o hell u c?
    u cant refuse this deal shoulda stayed clean
    Es killed u for real man im sorry I mean,
    put extra coke in everything u ate,
    made u choke, now dats evil hate,
    da food u digested, had so much essence,
    coulda got u arrested, now infested wit worms
    ur here for eternity, friary ha ha u get jokes he he?, shoulda capped dat guy in the ally it was me. <<boo!!>> ha ha ha ha!

    esjay

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    that was good, keep it up.
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