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    Hey all...

    I wrote this about ten minutes ago... What your reading hapenned last night... and i just wanted to post it somewhere...

    lemme know what y'all think... it's my second attempt at writing something that sounds kinda good. It's freestyle in the sense that I only really corrected like one word.. Every line just came straight from my head and then wrote it...

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    I got home last night with my girl and it was tight.
    started out alright but turned nasty without a fight.
    I'm unlocking my door and went to step in my place
    when a car stopped close to mine and out came a face.

    I recognized him right away while my girl went inside.
    he said hi stepped up and that's when i recognized.
    I didn't know it was him and had i known for sure,
    I would have turned around quick went inside like a blur.

    So I chatted with him for a few minutes before I left.
    went straight inside with my pride and in started the mess.
    Took my shit off and went straight to the kitchen.
    my girl steps up behind me and starts all the bitchin.

    I've got no argument so i can only stair and listen.
    man she's fucking trippin, and she's really fuckin rippin.
    if she keeps this up i'm gonna have ta straight start flippin.
    give me a broom now and she'll quick start limpin.

    you know i'm just kidding, now i wouldn't start killing.
    might be fullfilling hide the body in a vacant building.
    vaccum all the living room, air freshen the place soon.
    slice some steak serate while i stir some sauce with a spoon.
    Last edited by Robinson; 04-17-2003, 09:42 PM.

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