TeLL Me whAt SkILL LvL i AM aT rAPpin

[M-LoXTaa]

im spit fire so check this Oh yo, Im a new rapper in the block, but some how my brain got this lock, i cant rap 2 the fullist some times, but it sometimes helps when i drink wine, dawg im just bustin this ryme, do u think u can handle 1 more line? this be just a little sample, kind of like an example, of what kind of shit i can tare up, And my Homies kno how its set up, Rate this shit i just wrote, im out im gonna get some tasty coke, peace out dawgz and dont forget 2 right me back, i wont forget about this busty rap.



M-LoXtA

[Famous420]

well. it didnt suck completely

[M-LoXTaa]

YEah i Guess iT Sux

[Zodiak]

You're right, it sucked bad. And learn how to spell.
Z

[Capman]

First of all write your shit with some structure, it almost had no flow written like that man! Verse it and it'll look better. I reccomend that you check out some battles at the rookie battles forum so you learn sumthin, there's a thread with advice for newbies too, it might be helpful. Peace

[Red-Out]

skill level= 1.7/10

[lil_nelly20]

What the fuck was that?
that was the lamest shit that came off ur back
i said u can rap and ur new on the block
well ur brain sure does have a lock
ur rap make no sense
its so bad u should decend
come on stop rap'n
cuz ur be teared up liek my scrapin
learn from the best
and don't take shit from my chest
so lets see what u got
nothing nothing that is what i thought..

[XLrhymez]

yo nelly ur rhymes are so lame
don't even try to play my game
don't fuck with other people u have no rhymes
and stop wasting other people's time
what u need is orignality
not some shit u got off somebody u are gulity
so come back to rap only when u know how to
don't waste my time cuz i will rip u

[K-a$h]

i didnt think it was as bad as yuo all were makin out but M-LoXTaa your lil pic thing unda ya name - it freaks me out, kinda reminds me of michael jackson aswell, but thats another story

[M-LoXTaa]

HAHA i posted thiz shit the first day i join'd this D12 shit/
i dont write like that n e more cause it just dont fit//
my flow was bad and it really stunk/
but now this shit i write is nothin but funk//
yeah that picture is pritty freaky son/
and i bet if Michael Jackson saw it he would probably run//
cause when i finish spitin ther is nothin left to say/
The only people that say shit end up being gay//

[Lyrical Murder]

Originally posted by Famous420
well. it didnt suck completely

yes it did... lol

[dtwelve]

[QUOTE]Originally posted by lil_nelly20
[B]What the fuck was that?
that was the lamest shit that came off ur back

lil nelly why come up in ppls freestyles n try n diss them, coz u cant fuckin rap

[Spoken]

Aight Listen Up Children

Why you dissin M-Lox when ya'll drop wacker verses then him...
Spittin disses in his thread, when in reality if you battled him he'd win...
Lil_Nelly how you gon' tell'em to stop "rap'n" and "that was the lamest shit that came off his back"?...
I think you need ta reverse ya first line to your verse and ask yaself,

Originally posted by Lil_Nelly20
What the fuck was that?

fuck it i'm done with you, pussy...

[phase1]

hopeless individuals rap but it dont work no more
cuz phase1 is in the game showing you the back door
enough with the bitch slaps...you looks like my sisters
for what we know you probly wear makeup and chase after old misters
well i aint hear to peep yall out, i just wanna make clear
that fake emcees who cant rap shouldnt talk shit up in here
if you take one look around and search deep inside yourself
youll soon realize your just like old dusty book..stuck on the shelf
recognition is a key factor if you wanna stand out
but dont diss people's shit when you got no clue what you talk about
your own rhymes make me shiver so i look at my reign
as i fully digest you with vocabulary pain