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    Yo Yo

    My lyrical skills are so good they can beat anyone on this planet;
    And their so fierce and restless you can't can it;
    I drop freestyles at the drop of a hat, i don't plan it;
    If i dont stop fucking cursing im sure they'll ban it;
    I entered a walking competion and just ran it;
    My styles so good i now struggle to walk;
    Its being bitten so much that makes it hard to talk;
    But all you fake ass *****s just squak;
    As you'll parrots that just copy,do,say and follow;
    Thats why your style ends up sounding hollow;
    Whats so bad about keepin' it real and true to heart;
    I know as i was there right from the start;
    All these fake ass ***** do is play the part;
    And fit into the image portrayed of us in the papers;
    Thugs,Druggies,Criminals;G;Doggs;Badboys and rapers;
    And whenever we break free and go agaisnt this all the record company do is cape us.....
    *****-D-V-S-*****

    *****-Dangerous-Vicious-Sick-*****

    100% Real

  • #2
    Reply

    It would be nice for a reply, this verse was dropped a bit ago. i know you read this shit
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    • #3
      Re: The Whole Industry

      Originally posted by DVS

      And fit into the image portrayed of us in the papers;
      Thugs,Druggies,Criminals;G;Doggs;Badboys and rapers;
      And whenever we break free and go agaisnt this all the record company do is cape us.....
      Great flow of words and thoughts!
      Keep u the good work
      The last quote is gonna be legendary!
      A lotta holla from Mentira
      /-\narchy.

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      • #4
        Thanx

        Lol i like the way you say "legendary" thanx
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        • #5
          nice

          i love the positive message.

          but beacause it don't have music behind it, you have to make sure it flows so people can truly feel it. w/out the music, that's really hard. count your lines. each line is essentially a bar.
          keep that in mind. and watch for the grammar, w/out it, it makes it hard to understand.

          instead of can it, you should've said stand it.-just a thought.
          don't be afraid to use near rhymes.

          but this is my favorite of yours yet.

          keep 'em comin.

          peace-jehu
          Last edited by jehurocket; 08-18-2001, 02:36 PM.
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          TEAR ME APART AND START AT THE SPINE

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