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    [CENTER]FREESTYLE

    I leave emcee's senial when i drop a freestyle you'll have to have 911 on speed-dial//

    my style like a frieght-train that nobody can maintain all over the place you gonna see some sprayed brains//

    if you think your ILL im a make sure when i spill i cure you with a fucking tylenol-pill//

    i'm immortal and untouchable i kill you emcee mortals you so fragile and crushable//

    yall' spit like dirty virus thing my spit comes out as clean as irish-springs//

    my multi's are lethal and equal to all your words when i throw in an adverb and your face'll bash'n the curb//

    im an arcade but chu aint got no tokens i aint jokin i spit and you be choking//

    you couldnt beat me if you had nas' book-of-rhymes cause it wouldnt matter you'd get shook-from-mine i smoke you up like knicks and dimes i still haven showed you all the tricks of mine//

    better beware cause the demon-is-here my skills give all these bitches a reason-to-fear//

    you leave a battle with authorious cause i explode you fucka's like nitrious cant ride my dick i got elephant titus emcee be shaking even a shark wont bite-this//






    THIS WAS JUST SOME SHIT I SPIT QUICK TRYIN SOMETHING NEW
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  • #2
    my multi's are lethal and equal to all your words when i throw in an adverb and your face'll bash'n the curb//
    whoa great flow man!

    you couldnt beat me if you had nas' book-of-rhymes cause it wouldnt matter you'd get shook-from-mine i smoke you up like knicks and dimes i still haven showed you all the tricks of mine//
    damn hotness right there ... my fav bar in the hole verse!

    you leave a battle with authorious cause i explode you fucka's like nitrious cant ride my dick i got elephant titus emcee be shaking even a shark wont bite-this//

    ill!...great way to end the verse...awesome Killa wateva u tryin different stick to it!

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    • #3
      yo
      thats was nice

      from the sic line to the end
      every bit was hot
      Alumni
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      • #4
        thnx for the feedback...

        and yah brooklyn i changed my style up a little i wanted to see if peep's liked it... i guess so... so im a keep it like this... thnx
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        • #5
          uppin this shit...
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          • #6
            I'm lovin it man, this way of writing gives a fast smooth reading impression (in my oppinion, of course) and all your verses were really tight. Peace
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            • #7
              Capman THNX FOR THE FEEDBACK...
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              • #8
                You're welcome homie. D'You have MSN?
                Sniper 113: It's nice talkin' to ya on MSN, wait 'til we drop our audio


                People I respect in this board (though I haven't even talked to some lol)

                Tennesee LilM DirtyIrish MilS PawlDerty KG FLEX IE Aphyna Red-Out Killuminati CAL h20 Brooklyn Skeptikal UrbanAKA CapP LyricalMurder



                www.soundclick.com/dacapmen

                I'm back! No battle record (it was 2-1 anyway), but I'm stronger (and busier) than ever!

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                • #9
                  NAH I GOT AOL...
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                  • #10
                    oh shit, I don't have aol man. it would've been nice havin' you in my peeps list. Anyways, know you have my props man, mad respect for ya.
                    Sniper 113: It's nice talkin' to ya on MSN, wait 'til we drop our audio


                    People I respect in this board (though I haven't even talked to some lol)

                    Tennesee LilM DirtyIrish MilS PawlDerty KG FLEX IE Aphyna Red-Out Killuminati CAL h20 Brooklyn Skeptikal UrbanAKA CapP LyricalMurder



                    www.soundclick.com/dacapmen

                    I'm back! No battle record (it was 2-1 anyway), but I'm stronger (and busier) than ever!

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                    • #11
                      TRU... THNX MAN
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                      • #12
                        you forgot to do the [/center] at the end dawg!

                        you leave a battle with authorious cause i explode you fucka's like nitrious cant ride my dick i got elephant titus emcee be shaking even a shark wont bite-this//


                        LMFAO!!!
                        illness


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                        • #13
                          thnx for the feedback noxshus...
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                          • #14
                            yo killuminati yo got some motha fuckin dope shit dog
                            well im outty peace keep it yo

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                            • #15
                              thnx 313eard...
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