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    Ya’ll dunt even know about this shit // imma white grl tryin to flip the switch // turnin light bulbs on top of yah head // sayin I aint too good at this seraude // but i dunt give a fuck ill do wat i want // when i want // cause maybe i got the shit to flaunt// too make u be like OOH WEE // think twice on how u SEE ME // not as a tweeked out trick actin like a bitch // but as a tree smoken feen who like to kick it wit da boys and make alotta noise // disturbing your sleep...shit u best try and count them sheep...cause nothin can help you now....see what i wanna do is jus get down...gettin a lil dirty aint a problem with me....soon youll see // im hornay ,naughtay and i like to paurtey! Chillen here dirnkin mah fortay thinkin i can spit some ish // tryin to diss some peaople who are betta at dis game then I’ll ever wish // Ill still try // but dunt ever deny // the fact that i tryed to play a part in dat rap game // shit i aint lookin for fame jus a lil fun // this shit could keep me occupied for days // while mah mind is in a daze // trytin to make sense of whas goin on // everyhting is fucked up and goin wrong // but fuck that shit // i dont need the drama// Jus wish sumtimez i could be in a permanent slumber // people aint real // love changes and friends become strangaz // there nothin no one can do bout it except accept it // damn babay im goin crazy // all this mis-ery aint gonna cause me insan-ity// i dont front much that i got// but im shell shocked // never would of thought that i could play a role //of a punk ass white grl tryin to pay a toll // in her life to fulfill a gap // of wantin always to be able to rap // i must be outta mah head // i aint never gonna try this agian // in this life i dont got premeditaed destinations // just tryin to break any limitations // nobody ever gon get to me // even if i gotta flee // i jus gotta be me// Im goin whre im goin // seein who i gotta see.// jus being me for all i can be // me and mah crew// we jus tryin to get thru // thru the shit that everybody else is tryin too // there are only a select few // that can procceed woth out tha weed // and do the shit they doin // not havin pple be booin// the shit they be bringin to them// makin em all be like oooh damn// on n on i go// i dunt even kno if i ever caught a flow// maybe i did...maybe i wont...who ever will kno is a mystery in its own//PEACE OUT
    Last edited by Miss JMC; 04-19-2003, 12:53 AM.
    Miss JMC Wantin To SuCeed Her Need For Bein Me, Miss JMC

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    yo this was alright
    expand vocab
    use better metaphors
    work on multi's
    keep elevatin
    Ay-yo my murderous rap verbal attack is actual fact/
    Tactical tracks match perfectly with graphical stats/
    Half a you lack the magical dap of tragical rap/
    That tackles you back and shackles and laughs at you/
    That's...the mathematical madness I'm on, the savage, the strong/
    The marriage, a bond of havoc and song/
    This massacre's on as if Picasso laced you/
    There's lotsa hateful skeletons locked/
    in the closet of my castle of Grayskull/
    I'm possum at grade school, that's why I have to debate you/
    My raps are like Capel, slashin' your face, you/
    That's how a master degrades you/
    I'm battlin' Jesus (hay-soos) if he passes through my label
    I'm snatchin' his halo/
    God I pray that you send my father back as an angel/
    Language is fatal and it's hypnotizin'/
    I'm only emphasizin', I'm still all about business and enterprisin'/
    I'm super lyrical, a brain boosts the chemicals/
    That's used contenicals inside of my mental projectable/
    big pun-super lyrical
    he one of the best defenilty up there with tupac and biggie



    ..::battle record ::..
    ..::1-2 ::..
    ..::wins ::..
    ..:: lyrically compact::..
    ..:: losses::..
    ..:: amode::.. good battle
    ..:: king of kb::.. close

    [/CENTER]
    shout-out to the one of the best this board has seen shadygirl i'll miss ya
    your rhymes were killer keep ya head up

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