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    give me some feedback on this

    the rules of the streets/
    kick back and vibe on some tight beats/
    ain't no love on the block,when you sellin rock/
    thats why i keep my glock cock, in case some fools try to come up/
    you know they get done with the 45 on my back/
    I keep my cash stack,rollin in the caddilac/
    sippin konyak,heni to be exact/
    i'm flipin these mutha fuckin rhymes that i spit,still broke/
    I don't me to boast but i'm clamen west coast/
    I smoke weed every day/
    I smoke weed to maintain/
    chronic gets to the brain/
    mary jane keepin me safe from the everyday stuggles/
    From puddle to blood puddle, I ain't gonna stumble/
    My dreams are locked on the cash/
    rollin in the cadi 45 on dash/
    I have fantisies to buy my mama house on a hill/
    No worry about rent or payin any bills/
    no food in the fridge time to even up the score,livin the life god gaves us/
    hopin one day he'll come and save us/
    I going crazy in this war zone/
    I put the glock to my head afraid to be alone

  • #2
    if is true all that u said bou drugs and guns, its great as fuck, but if is a lie, then my friend its whack, thats mean that u are a wanksta, :P

    but, its great, only if is true
    Mind fucked Since 1997

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    • #3
      all that shits true. you think i'd make some shit up like that. and it ain't great that my peeps are gettin shot.

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      • #4
        sorry dawg, are u stupid?? i said the shit is great, refering to the verse, in a lirical way, is great, what?? do u think that enjoy how people get killed?? or how people lose their faith cuz they have to carry with the worlds misery?? please man, ur shit is ill but, dont come to me with that bullshit that i enjoy that shit,


        M.Blade
        Mind fucked Since 1997

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        • #5
          i was saying that all that shit is true. I ain't no wangsta. that was my second flow.how is it for a begginer.

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