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    I'm stuck. Just for shits and giggles, someone gimee a line. I'm not gonna use it though, cuz I would never take somebody elses shit. Here's what I got so far...

    Raised far from sane
    Blaze bars like flames
    We are NOT the same
    Cuz I don't spar with lames
    Gimee a break
    I rape break beats and you get beat till you break
    The fake get ate like a plate of baked beans
    You mainly entertain me
    I'm plainly insane, see?

    That's it. The flow I got goin on here is kinda hot. I got a bunch of shit in my head, but nuthin's clickin. I kinda wanna keep the "ane" "ee" rhyme scheme goin. Just lookin for feedback. When I finish the rhyme, I'll let you know how I did it
    I'm synanomous with great
    The opposite of fake
    You probably want me to break,
    But that's NOT my fate...

    Battle cats battle back, with whack ass battle raps
    Catch a battle axe, bitch, battle that...

    These late night schemes might be pipe dreams
    But unless I give it a go, I'll never know

    313 Outlawz
    The Reality U Try Hidein (TRUTH)

  • #2
    Raised far from sane
    Blaze bars like flames
    We are NOT the same
    Cuz I don't spar with lames
    Gimee a break
    I rape break beats and you get beat till you break
    The fake get ate like a plate of baked beans
    You mainly entertain me
    I'm plainly insane, see?


    a cup of tea? you disagree?
    then ima have to gaurantee
    a spot for you in tennesee
    where i can fuck you up, to a tolerable degree
    and toss you overbaord, to the carrabean see
    ill bite you, like a bite a german bee
    ya you see? i AM craz-ee
    the only wicked MC, your ever gonna see
    who takes a pea, only under a coconut trea
    just count to three
    1 - 2 - 3... times up bitch, time to plea
    i call the shots around here, IM the referee
    ill give you burns to the extent of third degree
    and still have time to hang you from a macadamia tree

    ok... lol.... there you go

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    • #3
      Raised far from sane
      Blaze bars like flames
      We are NOT the same
      Cuz I don't spar with lames
      Gimee a break
      I rape break beats and you get beat till you break
      The fake get ate like a plate of baked beans
      You mainly entertain me
      I'm plainly insane, see?

      im labelled insane
      just a pawn in this game
      got all the bitches sayin my name
      ive sent u 2 tha graveyard buried u 6th feet deep
      i did woteva it took to make u sleep
      im waitin for the jurys decision
      ive got a phone call i dont no who im ringin
      i only carried this gun for my protection
      now im insane facing the lethal injection
      "Now you can hum all you want to
      Cum all you want to
      Money I'm a front you
      Girl I wanna flaunt you
      I'm always want you
      when nobody wants you
      If I die now my love will still haunt you"

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      • #4
        Just reverse it.

        I'm plainly insane, see?
        or maybe insanely plain
        I renamed my name
        but I remain the same

        Anyway, hope I could help you.
        Z
        I'm givin this spittin' on the anatomy of rap
        I'm grippin' the rhythm then rippin', that'd be a fact
        It's easy, ya' see, the mic and me be practically attached
        Cause me and this beat be tied like pinkies, we like that

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        • #5
          yo when u say "ee"
          does that me like
          im plainy insane see
          cant u see me im like a orange hat i stand out clearly
          or do u mean
          me see three

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