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  • House Of Pain (feedback would be NICE)

    During mah birth,
    black candles was lit
    to set mah curse
    and tha earth
    hurt as worse
    as I did
    when I came out
    feet first
    into tha dirt
    on mah soft spot
    Ever since that moment
    that I was delivered
    I've alwaes been considered
    tha unluckiest
    of sinners
    Type o' *****
    bitches don't want over
    with family for dinner
    Far from a winner
    Reject ejected
    from social class
    Welcome
    to a reject's perspective
    so kiss mah ass
    During class
    I jess sit in tha corner
    and get laffed at
    Cock tha gat back
    BLAU BLAU
    Stand back, bratz
    haha I've got
    dreams an'
    schemes an'
    mad demons
    keep screamin'
    for me to release 'em
    What do u say y'all?
    Motha fuck this rhyme
    Itz about that time
    BITCHES
    call me Columbine


    Chorus: Popped blood veins
    and blood drained
    out like mah dick
    afta I bust came
    Str8 blood stains
    and fuck zane
    Bitch
    I was raised in tha house of pain
    Last edited by Lyrikally Lost; 08-10-2001, 09:06 PM.
    Lyrikally Lost aka Fidel Kastrator


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  • #2
    Nice.....

    Tight rhyme dog.Keep'em up.Flowed really really good.Tight lyricz,concept was good to.Keep it up playa,1!

    Go rate my thread called "Pop Pop"

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    • #3
      That was Meaningful and Incumpusing!

      Many good words could discribe the vibe I felt.What are you gonna do with it?It's so good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!From start to finish.You rule...

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      • #4
        thankz, y'all. but CAN I GET SOME MORE FEEDBACK
        Lyrikally Lost aka Fidel Kastrator


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        • #5
          Nice.....

          You have got a very nice flow! I read it over 3 seperate beats and it fit them all on time, and spotless. I like that shit man! 4 Real! Keep it coming at a pace, man

          Peace to you.
          One.
          AIM: DarkDruid123

          Record: 17~4~0

          "FUCK Y'ALL!!"

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