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    This is just a little something I wrote. It's pretty short, but I decided to post it up on here anyways to see what y'all think. It's kinda dark, lol I was pissed when I wrote it. Anyways lemme know what you guys think about it.


    I've had it up to here and that's the end of my patience/ it's like I reached my point and used up all of my rations/ I'm raging now ready to attack/ I'm hungry for violence and you look like a snack/ a person can only take so much/ before they crack and their hatred goes bust/ at the moment Iím more than ready to cuss/ my anger's showing and my knifeís ready to thrust/ Iím so damn mad I could either cry or kill/ one's about to happen and tears are not whatís gonna spill/ I could release all my tension upon your neck/ take out my aggression and choke you to death/ then hold you up as a constant reminder/ to any one that thinks my issues are minor

  • #2
    Nice.....

    hey that's rather good. (but then, what i know right? i posted a flow on here, and not one person has give me any feed-back!)

    But i intend on breaking the cycle, i liked it a lot. Good job gal, and i'll definately look at any more raps that you decide to post on here.

    peace, aight gal?
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    • #3
      Thanx, I'll look at your flows, but I'm fairly new on here too. Uppin for more comments.

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      • #4
        that was nice, keep it up. you could of used sets of rhymes longer than 2, but it was still good.
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        • #5
          nice

          your rhymes are ok thats all i got to say
          girls (y'all a some god damn girls)
          why do you act this way? (why do you act this way, huh?)
          why do y'all act like fuckin sissies you pussies keep talkin shit behind my back you just some bitches for that and we all know (we all know)
          how fuckin cowards roll (keep rollin rollin rollin)
          and fuckin britneys who pretend to be down but as soon as someone calls you out you put your tail between your legs and bow down

          Fuck Bizkit

          DoggZ:

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