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  • My first online freestyle

    Just thought I would drop a quick verse please tell me what you think.

    I've exploded on everyone who's doubted me/ so don't go there

    most people think that I'm going no where

    they live to remind me that I'm white so I can't make it

    they tell me this is music you just can't fake it

    yeah when I battle I don't always win

    but everyone's gonna love me when i've got the frog skin

    the mic and the stage are the tools I need to release my rage built up inside

    its like a mental rollercoaster ride with twists and loops

    in my mind I'm fighting a bigger battle then the U.S. troops

    Noobody loves the next big rapper so I'm gonna have to work real hard for a real long time but no one knows all the rhymes and tricks in my mind

    they call me the V.P. because I am the second best MC only behind shady

    I'll take any challenger and make them look like a lady

    I'll destroy you like rabiit from 8 mile so i'll end this rhyme with a great smile

  • #2
    Come on man what the hell is this?
    Look like a lady?wow thats a diss
    come on man ur rhymes are lame
    how are u ever gonan obtaion fame.
    u newbie rapper better keep it real
    or ur never gonna get a record deal
    U the second best MC is that was u say
    i'll rip u to shreds u fucking gay
    so u say u can rap
    well i think its crap
    u got nothing man can u see
    cuz i am the sickest MC
    come to me and u'll see
    i'll embarass u and make u look like a lady
    so when u come back remeber to read my spits
    cuz u'll need to see cuz urs is shit
    my mother spit better shit bitch.

    peace out.
    sAy whAt?..nothing?...that is what i th0ught..u are d0ne^

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    • #3
      yo nelly he thinks he like rabbit from 8 mile
      endin this shit with a great smile
      yo dog should i kick his ass with a great freestyle
      yo u aint no shit and when u rap u aint no wat to say
      that last peice of shit u did well it was gay
      so ill spit shit that will rip u away like paper mashay
      if u respond to summin nelly said
      ill get momma slice her belly till she dead
      diss me and ill make my ryhmes sting like a lung full of crack
      smoke it up quick bitch i got a pistol to yo back

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      • #4
        hey yyo nellly is back
        the real rabbit is here and he ain't taking shit rap
        he will blow u away with his sick rhymes
        ask everyone he hurt this dude every single line
        he is good he sometime look like obie trice
        god damnit he can kill u before u hit the ground twice
        he won't make u look like some lady
        he will make u look so bad u'll think he's shady
        don't mess with rabbit cuz he'll leave u behind
        he shoot u in the face and make u blind....

        got ya back too rabbit.
        sAy whAt?..nothing?...that is what i th0ught..u are d0ne^

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        • #5
          zeker nederlands of niet........!!!
          Ruler of the underground!!!

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          • #6
            whats that supposed to mean brain power.ur picture looks liek a fag
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