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  • dust you freestyle////feedback???????

    hey yo,
    im runnin around fuckin like rabbits,its just a habbit/
    a superstistious drug addict,stuck on asic kid/
    poppin perkasets,but they aint workin yet/
    im down ta hurt a vet,with out any perposes/
    in the dark lerkin,a pervert ,expert at jerkin/
    its curtains,for certain,its wit ya bitch im flirtin/
    tryin ta get it up,poppin alot of viagra/
    fuck it in fed up,im kiddin,i almost had ya/
    right an a left ill jab ya,hit me back ill stab ya/
    find you in an empty parkin lot,dead couse i kidnapped ya/
    knocked you out cold an only tapped ya,but ripped ya back up/
    im callin ya bluff,enough is enough,you faggots aint tuff/
    once you see the tech,you faggots spread like fuckin fluff/
    weres the penute butter?i need another/
    dont care who ima make um suffer/
    doind drive bys on bmx bicycle/
    have you sleepin like nytequil/
    an leave ya wit dialated pupils/
    thers no loop holes,only rot souls,wit hot pros/
    im lack tose,an tollarant,ecnolage it/
    take ya fuckin food from you an salvadge is/
    ima savage kid,wit a lisp,an a fat lip/
    rip it,whip its,slit wrist,sting like hornets/
    im on it,but honust,wit a robust lust,you can trust/
    runnin around the clock,wit a glock,alla yall ah dust/


    just freestylin feedback pleasee????

  • #2
    thats ma b
    Today is filled with anger, fueled with hidden hate.
    Scared of being outkast, afraid of common fate.
    Today is build on tragedies which no one want's to face.
    Nightmares to humanity and morally disgraced.
    Tonight is filled with Rage, violence in the air.
    Children bred with ruthlessness cause no one at home cares.
    Tonight I lay my head down but the pressure never stops,
    knowing that my sanity content when I'm droped.
    But tomorrow I see change, a chance to build a new,
    build on spirit intent of heart and ideas based on truth.
    Tomorrow I wake with second wind and strong because of pride.
    I know I fought with all my heart to keep the dream alive.
    BY TUPAC SHAKUR.

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    • #3
      lol yups lol.thanx gurl 1

      uppin for more feed back??????\

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      • #4
        that shit tight cuz
        keep that shit up
        keep elevatin
        Ay-yo my murderous rap verbal attack is actual fact/
        Tactical tracks match perfectly with graphical stats/
        Half a you lack the magical dap of tragical rap/
        That tackles you back and shackles and laughs at you/
        That's...the mathematical madness I'm on, the savage, the strong/
        The marriage, a bond of havoc and song/
        This massacre's on as if Picasso laced you/
        There's lotsa hateful skeletons locked/
        in the closet of my castle of Grayskull/
        I'm possum at grade school, that's why I have to debate you/
        My raps are like Capel, slashin' your face, you/
        That's how a master degrades you/
        I'm battlin' Jesus (hay-soos) if he passes through my label
        I'm snatchin' his halo/
        God I pray that you send my father back as an angel/
        Language is fatal and it's hypnotizin'/
        I'm only emphasizin', I'm still all about business and enterprisin'/
        I'm super lyrical, a brain boosts the chemicals/
        That's used contenicals inside of my mental projectable/
        big pun-super lyrical
        he one of the best defenilty up there with tupac and biggie



        ..::battle record ::..
        ..::1-2 ::..
        ..::wins ::..
        ..:: lyrically compact::..
        ..:: losses::..
        ..:: amode::.. good battle
        ..:: king of kb::.. close

        [/CENTER]
        shout-out to the one of the best this board has seen shadygirl i'll miss ya
        your rhymes were killer keep ya head up

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        • #5
          yo thanx alot myrical,love feedback from you homie 1

          uppin for more feedback????

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