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    puttin down my first rhyme, listenin dope shit in the mean time, it's midnight after the sunset, and i didn't beat any1 yet, just like tearin a motherfocker up while i'm for the first time introduced 2 tha crip hop, first a blunt in the mouth then gettin down in the south, my life is never gonna end, all i need iz real friendz, hangin round the old crew, wot ya gonna do, don't think i'm a nasty ass fool, nobody knows who they are dealin with, i especially ain't a fuckin kid, btw i just caught up by a fuckin pig who couldn't get of my dick, only seeing the stupid outfit of a cop it really makes me sick, after that gettin tired of the screamin of my dad, then surprised i'm gettin mad, then i'm the opposite of a real nice lad, suddenly with other missions, only wanna hit big things
    plz don't judge this one 2 bad
    **StIlLmAtIc**
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    ħħ18-12-2001ħħ

    "Put it together, I rock hoes, y'all rock fellas." NaS

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    peace

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    well, one thing you should do when you rhyme is do it like this..
    cool calm just like ym mom//
    with a couple of vailum inside her palm//

    like make ur rhyme like that so us people know what's supposed ot rhyme and whats not supposed ot rhyme, and ya need some work to...
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      aaaaight
      **StIlLmAtIc**
      http://www.stillmatic.com/images/image1.jpg
      ħħ18-12-2001ħħ

      "Put it together, I rock hoes, y'all rock fellas." NaS

      http://members.home.nl/bartrikers/chrisje.jpg

      CrAzY pRoBz 2 Bullet 4 my avatar and banner...

      peace

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