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  • Mentally Lost (feedbakk is alwaes good)

    Mah mind is filled with thoughts
    Alot of thoughts, I can't stop tha thoughts
    without shots of vodka
    and...mah mind starts ta
    lock up, Make me feel like an outsida
    like tha Phantom of tha Opera
    and... Visions of mah body shot up
    and boxed up in caskets all locked up
    but... no matta what still, I rocks tha spot
    like Silk Tha Shocka
    Maybe I need a doctor
    cuz mah mind moves with so much traffic
    Romantic, graphic,
    black magic thoughts trapped in
    tha back in of mah head, they can't stop runnin'
    No matta whatz goin' on
    gotz problems or somethin'
    but...when I rap, itz str8 bring tha drama on
    Nuthin' can stop me now
    not even lyrikal laudanum
    Unleash mah greatest weapon
    mah mind all on a song
    and...thatz greater than any weaponry
    Shit'll fuck u up afta u f with me
    Slice 'em feet off now u can't step to me
    haha...U see, I don't type or write
    with mah fingaz, I write and type
    with mah mind, I fight all nite
    with mah mind, jess like
    itz mah wife, tha rest of mah life
    with mah mind, Strikin' down lines
    like lightenin', U want this lyrikal vikadine?
    (no) aiight then
    then u'd bettah move up out mah way
    aiight, friend?
    cuz....I be hype all night an'
    go out like ***** men,
    Screamin' and fightin'
    and.. there jess no stoppin' me
    Not when I got 55 shots in me
    Don't try to talk to me
    when I'm in this state
    cuz probably
    u'll end up shot like Pac and Poppa be
    so...Rest in peace
    is what u see afta u messed with me
    and.. Hashes, blown to fragments,
    ashes I light with matches
    Mind cuts u in half like a hatchett
    Get yo' ass kicked, Gash dammit!!

    gimme some feedback, guyz!! and go vote on mah battlez thatz been goin' on Lyrikally Lost Vs. Kon Artizt and Open Battle!! 15 to 20 Bars!! First to 3 votes . aiight, guyz? peace tha hekk out!!
    Lyrikally Lost aka Fidel Kastrator


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  • #2
    c'mon, y'all, gimme some feedback.
    Lyrikally Lost aka Fidel Kastrator


    http://invince.8m.net/dei2.gif

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    • #3
      c'mon guyz!! feedback!!
      Lyrikally Lost aka Fidel Kastrator


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      • #4
        nice

        That had a very nice flow dogg. I also like reading your shit. The last few lines were the tightest. They had a real fucking good flow to them. WEll, i'll keep peeping your posts, if you keep peeping mine and my doggs'!

        Keep dropping that illmatic shit, man-coz i will be checking on you everytime you drop a flow, just to be sure that you keeping with your high standards! aight dogg!? :D

        Peace man.
        One.
        AIM: DarkDruid123

        Record: 17~4~0

        "FUCK Y'ALL!!"

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        • #5
          more replies, what up?
          Lyrikally Lost aka Fidel Kastrator


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          • #6
            a to it had real ill shit pieced together you had a different flow but it was good

            "Hashes, blown to fragments,
            ashes I light with matches
            Mind cuts u in half like a hatchett
            Get yo' ass kicked, Gash dammit!!"

            that was definately your best lines very good flow good content remineded me of part of eminems verse in hellbound it was sick kid peace keep the flow goin

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            • #7
              nice

              yo dat was great, very nice flow and nice rhymes, way to mix up da styles!
              What u know,i'll stole ur show!

              Now watch my peformance explode!

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