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    ya i heard u scremin like u were being chased by a demon/
    now im steamin, cause i was meanin to put u out/
    with out any doubts/
    me vs. u in a one on one bout/
    u lost now u runnin off to pout/
    when i kill you there will be no shout/
    quickly done with out a bet/
    i love the feeling of snappin your neck/
    put my hand on your juggla to check/
    nope no life left/
    Da moral to dis song is great/
    just dont test me or fate/
    dont push da limits over da rate/
    and you just might live a longer late/

    I can do better but i was just bored and wanted some practice tell me what u think this is my 3rd rhyme now im 14 and form IILINOIS!
    What u know,i'll stole ur show!

    Now watch my peformance explode!

  • #2
    come on

    a lil advice here! IM tryin to get betta!
    What u know,i'll stole ur show!

    Now watch my peformance explode!

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    • #3
      ITE!

      No one will give me a Fuckin Response!! DAMN I WANT ADVICE!
      What u know,i'll stole ur show!

      Now watch my peformance explode!

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      • #4
        ya gettin better, still needs work tho,
        wanna battle?
        SAIGON - The Greatest Story Never Told : Coming Soon

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        • #5
          ****(DEFEATED)****
          Sween Dogg (3-0)
          X-Tacy (3-0)
          Bullet (5-2)
          MC Coulomb (5-2)
          Big Bonger (5-1)
          Nsync Boy (3-0)

          nsync boy (3-0)!! LMAO HARD!!!!!
          Elite Tournament 2 Champion
          like 110-19 or some shit
          blah blah blah and all that other shit we used to put in our sigs lol
          [insert net crew banner here]

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          • #6
            ite

            Ite i'll battle ya setup a thread!
            What u know,i'll stole ur show!

            Now watch my peformance explode!

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