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  • MENTIRA IS BACK...the word to all the sluts out there

    This very special song/
    is dedicated to those/
    that wait for the prince on the white horse/
    to come and open that white benz doors/
    take you to his casle, his villa, his mansion/
    help you with your world expansion/
    get you, at least, ten maids/
    so you don't need to cook nad clean, just wait/
    dinner to be served/
    only porcelain and silver spoons/
    not less, always more/
    don't need a husband that adore/
    but husband that can get you that new fur/
    that's only way you'll get any pussy, sir/
    the clock is loud ringing, you gotta wake up/
    didn't you leave some dishes to wash from last night?/
    When the night comes/
    shaking ass in some club/
    looking for the object that spark/
    when the light hits through dark/
    than like 2pac said "Wonder why they call you bitch"/
    I don't wanna be a snitch/
    I walked the same path but stoped dreaming when I was 12/
    realized if I want something done I have to do it by myself/
    Did what I need to do to get respect from all sides/
    if I never make it, shit, at least I tried/
    Bizarre from D-12 said and shit is supreme:/
    "Nothing comes to a sleeper but a dream" /////
    /-\narchy.

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    I'm back cutie! See you tonight (in live color)!
    Tight shit like always!
    Your dogg for life Ape!
    Ape a.k.a. The-Chill-Out - official memeber of DOMUSTICUS CREW

    Shout outs:
    d12girl (Mentira), dbaby12 (tina), Masked Murdarah (Jeremy)

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    • #3
      o.k.

      i really liked the last 4 lines the most. that was the tight shit. it's nice to see some females representin. only problem i had, was getting past the grammar. when you leave out words like if, is and the word and, it's hard to understand. but you're kickin ass, keep it up.

      peace-jehu
      I HAVE NO HEART AND ONLY ONE MIND
      TEAR ME APART AND START AT THE SPINE

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      • #4
        I leave some words out cuz when I'm writing rhymes, I have this rhythm in my head. Rhyme has to fit the rhythm. That's the most important shit for me. It always has to be written for a beat.
        Thanks for the props.
        /-\narchy.

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        • #5
          ...

          this fucking sucked, i couldnt even read the whole thing it was hurtin my head, you cant rhyme and you cant write so go be a fucking stripper or something and shut ya damn mouth cause you cant do this shit right and i dont see any hope for your pathetic ass
          got in my car and picked up bizarre//in a neon jumper louder then vivtar//he saw me and laughed//white little girl with a big black ass//called me a weirdo so i had to attack him//snapped off my legs, hung from the sunroof and cunt smacked him//with genital warts on my lips, not the ones on my face//pussy so sore i had to buy a coochie brace//from my boyfriend who cheated on my with my daughter whos only 8//he hung her from the closet with a neon shoelace//i got mad// he got stabbed// and we sniffed a gram// made up, fucked now we laughin our asses off watchin sinbad//sick bitch, fuckin men women//the elderly and children//with a fetish for she-males//with tissues in their bras and 3 inch lee nails//dicks in skirts who eat pussy for females

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          • #6
            haha



            word
            MUTHAFUCK ACIDLOW

            nun of yah *****z got shit tah say

            cracken it with [CARTEL].

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            • #7
              STOP WHILE YOUR AHEAD

              I'm only going to say this was nice, it had alot of ideas but not freestyle of spitting materials,

              you got writing skills but..... this wasn't exactly a poetry board
              nah i mean
              YOU NEED TO GIVE IT UP
              CUZ WE DON'T GIVE A FUCK
              WHAT YA'LL HATERS WANT
              THE DICK IS MINE!

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              • #8
                Re: STOP WHILE YOUR AHEAD

                Originally posted by Mistress
                I'm only going to say this was nice, it had alot of ideas but not freestyle of spitting materials,

                you got writing skills but..... this wasn't exactly a poetry board
                nah i mean
                I'm here for a long long time....I sended a lotta rhymes....maybe this one is the most poetic one......I wrote from hardcore to cute kinda rhymes.....you have to know my work to judge it
                /-\narchy.

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