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  • Mentira
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    Re: STOP WHILE YOUR AHEAD

    Originally posted by Mistress
    I'm only going to say this was nice, it had alot of ideas but not freestyle of spitting materials,

    you got writing skills but..... this wasn't exactly a poetry board
    nah i mean
    I'm here for a long long time....I sended a lotta rhymes....maybe this one is the most poetic one......I wrote from hardcore to cute kinda rhymes.....you have to know my work to judge it

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  • Mistress
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    STOP WHILE YOUR AHEAD

    I'm only going to say this was nice, it had alot of ideas but not freestyle of spitting materials,

    you got writing skills but..... this wasn't exactly a poetry board
    nah i mean

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  • ACIDLOW
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    haha



    word

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  • 1st fem ofD12
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    ...

    this fucking sucked, i couldnt even read the whole thing it was hurtin my head, you cant rhyme and you cant write so go be a fucking stripper or something and shut ya damn mouth cause you cant do this shit right and i dont see any hope for your pathetic ass

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  • Mentira
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    I leave some words out cuz when I'm writing rhymes, I have this rhythm in my head. Rhyme has to fit the rhythm. That's the most important shit for me. It always has to be written for a beat.
    Thanks for the props.

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  • jehurocket
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    o.k.

    i really liked the last 4 lines the most. that was the tight shit. it's nice to see some females representin. only problem i had, was getting past the grammar. when you leave out words like if, is and the word and, it's hard to understand. but you're kickin ass, keep it up.

    peace-jehu

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  • Ape
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    I'm back cutie! See you tonight (in live color)!
    Tight shit like always!
    Your dogg for life Ape!

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  • Mentira
    started a topic MENTIRA IS BACK...the word to all the sluts out there

    MENTIRA IS BACK...the word to all the sluts out there

    This very special song/
    is dedicated to those/
    that wait for the prince on the white horse/
    to come and open that white benz doors/
    take you to his casle, his villa, his mansion/
    help you with your world expansion/
    get you, at least, ten maids/
    so you don't need to cook nad clean, just wait/
    dinner to be served/
    only porcelain and silver spoons/
    not less, always more/
    don't need a husband that adore/
    but husband that can get you that new fur/
    that's only way you'll get any pussy, sir/
    the clock is loud ringing, you gotta wake up/
    didn't you leave some dishes to wash from last night?/
    When the night comes/
    shaking ass in some club/
    looking for the object that spark/
    when the light hits through dark/
    than like 2pac said "Wonder why they call you bitch"/
    I don't wanna be a snitch/
    I walked the same path but stoped dreaming when I was 12/
    realized if I want something done I have to do it by myself/
    Did what I need to do to get respect from all sides/
    if I never make it, shit, at least I tried/
    Bizarre from D-12 said and shit is supreme:/
    "Nothing comes to a sleeper but a dream" /////

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