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    not a freestyle...well it once was.. in a battle.. but i jus wanted to show ya'll some my lyrics.. maybe get sum feedback..so repLy.. !!

    no one wantz to be as sicc as you/they wont stoop that low/
    wen ur on the stage/the phrase people say/is whos that ho?/
    the lyrics you write/wouldnt be tight/if they were a newborns vagina/
    and you wouldnt be great/if you were a wall in china/
    but my lyrics fall harder than when seagulls start crappin/
    i bring them stern and grim/even though u see me laughin/
    i hit your whack shit/like its bitches im slappin/
    believe d12/if you fuq with me then shit can happen/
    yo you'd drool better spit out/if we battled while u were nappin/
    im like a lighted "applause" sign/cuz i get everyone clappin/
    ill kill your lyricz/bag them up/then add your body/
    press print/im poisonous like ink/murdering like im irv gotti/
    cuz your talkin about adidas/well i'll kick ya ass to the southpole/
    try to hit me/and my reactions kill like a lethal kenneth cole/
    i triple your ratings of 5/u disect my spirit?/i kill your soul/
    i bring my punches big, 100 percent/cuz thats just how i roll/
    rollin by your weak lyrics just cruisin/cuz im in control/
    i have the money to buy/but its your 'show' i just stole/
    im blazin/chevy-style, i bring it hard like a rock/
    i learned to rap/before i even knew how to talk/
    no. 1 stunna/with a warning tag "possible death of electric shock"/
    cuz im the greatest makin hits "until the end of time" like 2pac
    www.respectmine.com/forum

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    nice

    i love the metaphors and hyperbole's.

    all dope.

    clever media references as well. nice work.

    keep 'em comin.

    peace-jehu
    I HAVE NO HEART AND ONLY ONE MIND
    TEAR ME APART AND START AT THE SPINE

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