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  • are you bored w/ played out verses?

    i'm tired of bad rhymes
    and i'm sick of shitty rhymes
    and i'm fed up w/ unoriginal rhymes
    and i don't ever want hear another braggadocio rhyme/

    hmm...
    how many "ime" sounds rhyme w/ rhyme?
    let's see, there's crime, behind and rewind...
    spine, find, and grime, gettin old yet?
    i've got all the time to spit wack lines.
    should i define what a wack rhyme is?
    it's a line that you've read that you could've finished in your head before it was written down w/ lead.
    so predictable i could tell you what they said w/out
    reading the rest.
    and i'm no mind reader.
    it's just that, the best rhymes are written by believers.
    haters wanna deceive ya w/ venom.
    cuz they can't win so they keep pretendin to be a preacher.
    that's why i stay underpaid like your favorite teacher.
    i can rise up to deliver the word from underneath ya.
    how good is yer sermon when no one's learnin?
    i'm turnin heads and burnin feds while they're cursin my name.
    i'm reworkin the beaten path while you're still searchin on the last
    do the math. you'll never make it to the pass.
    you keep searchin for what you've always had.
    stickin to fads, afraid to look past you're own limits,
    you're a gimmick who's afraid to give it.
    afraid to live it to the fullest for every minute.
    so concerned w/ winnin you're spinnin out of control,
    down into a hole you keep diggin.
    your soul needs to quit admittin defeat.
    how the hell are you gonna complete your mission,
    when you're missin your chance to reach wisdom?

    chorus:
    i'm just really tired of reading the same rhyme,
    reworded 30 times. i'm tryin to find anything w/ original lines.
    so quit lookin at mine and stop tryin to make it yours.
    you're all grown up now, open your own doors.

    i implore you to bite what i write
    you could copy word for word and you still wouldn't get it right
    you fools are STILL tryin to catch up when i type
    i ignite the the firefight's fuse when i spit spite
    i refuse to let you attempt to spit hype
    i'll make you repent to the lord & have you beggin for your life.
    i'll take the knife out my back and show you the
    reflection in the light
    i don't need ANY protection when i get into a fight
    i just unite w/ karma and open my eyes for sight
    so i can see what you're gonna do to me
    i'll be done w/ you before you're thru w/ me
    so if your feelings get hurt, you can sue me
    you'll be infamous by then, so tell people you knew me.
    you can say something like "he blew me away,
    i couldn't hear his voice but i knew he was comin my way.
    it was erie how he had me played,
    i should've fuckin knew i was gonna get sprayed!"
    the end.

    like i said in the rhyme, i wanna see something original that inspires me. i see pretty good shit once in a while, but it still ain't inspiring me to create for myself. maybe i'm preaching to choir, or maybe i'm talkin to a wall. i just need something new and refreshing.

    i get so bored w/ 99% of you cats. but i give props to all those who make a legitimate effort to do something different. thanks and keep trying for your sake and mine. let's raise this shit up a level.

    tell me what you think.

    one love to exizt and druid for keeping it locked down.

    peace-jehu
    Last edited by jehurocket; 08-18-2001, 11:06 AM.
    I HAVE NO HEART AND ONLY ONE MIND
    TEAR ME APART AND START AT THE SPINE

  • #2
    what's wrong?

    is there too much integrity in my rhymes for you people to acknowledge them. i can see people are lookin at it, but no one leaves feedback. i don't care if the feedback is negative, as long as it's legit. and don't be resortin to that stupid name callin shit either. that shit is for kids

    don't be scared.

    peace-jehu
    I HAVE NO HEART AND ONLY ONE MIND
    TEAR ME APART AND START AT THE SPINE

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    • #3
      that's right.....

      You know what? I'm really fucking tired of people spitting worn out regurgetated verses and rhymes. In a lot of rhymes, you can indeed pedict what they were gonna say befire they even say it! Good work man, way to get them told! Yo man: P.m. me with any possible crew names, coz it's time to test our collective metel, and i'm sure Poizonous will agree. Also look out for one of my evil satanic and biblical spits real spits real soon, i have one brewing i can feel it....

      Peace dogg.
      (Let's drop some crew collabs me, you, and exizt!)
      One.
      AIM: DarkDruid123

      Record: 17~4~0

      "FUCK Y'ALL!!"

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